
12/16/2005 c1
10puddleoftears
interesting...nice way of using well known things and changing it a bit

interesting...nice way of using well known things and changing it a bit
12/16/2005 c1
35Daffodil Elizabeth
I love the adjectives! "Luscious red" was one of my favorite little phrases. I can almost see the exact shade of red that she might use.

I love the adjectives! "Luscious red" was one of my favorite little phrases. I can almost see the exact shade of red that she might use.
12/15/2005 c1
1AmbroseMaximilien
Very nice language and a good concept! I'd like to see it continue! ^^

Very nice language and a good concept! I'd like to see it continue! ^^
12/15/2005 c1
23Helena Evangelist
I love being the first reviewer. Anyway, this is very nicely written. Keep it up.
-Miss Helena Black

I love being the first reviewer. Anyway, this is very nicely written. Keep it up.
-Miss Helena Black