for But Then Maybe1/7/2006 c1 
612simpleplan13
i like this a lot.. the reptition of maybe gets your point across and i can totally relate
612simpleplan13i like this a lot.. the reptition of maybe gets your point across and i can totally relate
12/31/2005 c1 20Once in a blue moon
Did you write this as a song? Because it very easily could fall into a pattern of that sort.
Nice, though "maybe baby"... I don't know, it just doesn't flow for me. I like the last four lines much better. Actually, I think the last four lines are my favorite. How convenient! ^_^
20Once in a blue moonDid you write this as a song? Because it very easily could fall into a pattern of that sort.
Nice, though "maybe baby"... I don't know, it just doesn't flow for me. I like the last four lines much better. Actually, I think the last four lines are my favorite. How convenient! ^_^