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9/2/2008 c1 10dreameratbang
That was beautiful and very consoling. I absolutely loved it, the expression is to the point and yet very beautiful. Keep writing!
6/22/2007 c1 74laughter at the funeral
this is really pretty...i like that you described the stars "soft"...

it's really nice...

truly yours...
11/14/2006 c1 1FoxStorm
I love the way the words just seem to flow. I really love the three ending lines!
2/16/2006 c1 Needa S
Very interesting write. Awesome job.
12/27/2005 c1 Nacilme
Amazing poem. I love it!
12/19/2005 c1 20sloppy firsts
incredibly powerful. each word is equisitely placed and resounds a strong clear message. the ending sends so many emotions towards the reader. love. hope. fear. sorrow. this was incredibly well written.

keep writing always

s2 chaos
12/16/2005 c1 Silence the Storm
Absolutely outstanding...Complex, beautiful writing. The further I read, the more impressed I was. This poem is absolutely beautiful, stunning and intricate. The second and third verses were extraordinary. Truly impressive work, and now it is a part of my favourite's list. Keep up the fantastic work.
12/16/2005 c1 The Postscript
I believe a lot of things could be interpreted from this...the way in which you wrote it. However, when I read this I think of a friend of mine who died a couple years ago (but the day in which it occured is coming up) and how though I stand at his grave and cry, he is not there, he did not die...he lived because of that autumn rain that baptized him and gave him eternal live. You're writing is beautiful as it is, though, as I do not mean to inflict my religious beliefs on you...and hope that I did not offend you. Your writing is exquisite, keep writing.

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