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3/5/2006 c1 27Demosthenes-C
Wow..its been a while! hope you've been great. i just decided to get on fictionpress and start reading agian, and there you were! anyways, i love this poem, especially the last line..not sure if its a good thing or a bad thing to be known as a force though lol. overall a wonderful poem, my favorite part was "Caffeine without the kicks, Drug with all the side effects" amazing line. loved it..im going to go read more now:)
1/12/2006 c1 34Smoky Bear
i like the title, enovokes tim burton-esque images. really interesting read.
1/8/2006 c1 55Lellida
Oh I like it a lot! Each stanza is so different but they compliment each other perfectly. I love the line about the ticket no one is selling- reminds of an old old poem of mine. The first stanza is so dream-like and very mysterious, and the whole poem is very seductive.
12/28/2005 c1 144Infinite Smiles
Hello! I like the words that you use. It kind of reminded me of one of the books that I just finished reading, not the topic...just the wording. I like...

Ps. I found ur page on myspace and said hi.
12/17/2005 c1 137Ria Mala
This is interesting. You took an idea and jazzed it up with some nice vocab. The last line is my favorite: "This is not a person, this is a force."

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