for Escape9/30/2006 c1 
16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
How wise, so many threads of truth sown together. Congratulations on the award, you deserved it.
"Try to question the greatest menWhat truly aided their success;The answer would be: the words lentBy writers, poets, their muses."...you speak the reason why I keep writing, so I in some way affect people's lives for the better.
"What could overpower a bookOr one of its cherished pages?What could surpass paths a poem tookOr one of its lines for ages?"...and thus, a great exclamation point...my only criticism to this is that it tends to get a bit preachy, but I'm not taking anything from ya. Keep writing!
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionHow wise, so many threads of truth sown together. Congratulations on the award, you deserved it.
"Try to question the greatest menWhat truly aided their success;The answer would be: the words lentBy writers, poets, their muses."...you speak the reason why I keep writing, so I in some way affect people's lives for the better.
"What could overpower a bookOr one of its cherished pages?What could surpass paths a poem tookOr one of its lines for ages?"...and thus, a great exclamation point...my only criticism to this is that it tends to get a bit preachy, but I'm not taking anything from ya. Keep writing!
3/7/2006 c1 8Ria Moriais
Wow...I can never get my poems to rhyme and make sense or not sound stupid. And congrats on the award-y thingamabobbidijig.
8Ria MoriaisWow...I can never get my poems to rhyme and make sense or not sound stupid. And congrats on the award-y thingamabobbidijig.
1/28/2006 c1 41ConcealedWay
I can see why it recieved such an award, Doray. Don't be so hard on yourself. You deserve the praise, because it's a really good poem.
Beside, I agree with it!
:)
41ConcealedWayI can see why it recieved such an award, Doray. Don't be so hard on yourself. You deserve the praise, because it's a really good poem.
Beside, I agree with it!
:)