for Bloody Hunter12/18/2005 c4 
5KageNeko
^o^ heres my review kiss for making my day, keep up the good work, its comin along great.
5KageNeko^o^ heres my review kiss for making my day, keep up the good work, its comin along great.
12/18/2005 c2 53Lanie K
Hm,I got the impression that the character was a boy from the first chapter.Oh well,nice twist of events!
53Lanie KHm,I got the impression that the character was a boy from the first chapter.Oh well,nice twist of events!
12/17/2005 c2 5KageNeko
o.o you know i'm gonna say that I like it, so i guess I'll just say it again. I like it
5KageNekoo.o you know i'm gonna say that I like it, so i guess I'll just say it again. I like it
12/17/2005 c1 109vampiric-happenings
i liked it! very good. are you going to keep it going? i think u should! very good! *,*
109vampiric-happeningsi liked it! very good. are you going to keep it going? i think u should! very good! *,*
12/17/2005 c1 1Wat Sri-lan
The language is very descriptive, and I don't see any noticable mechanical errors.
Content wise, the context is unclear, although this is appearently intentional. Intentional or not though, a less creative audience generally won't have the patience to interpret it. Even for the rest of us, a background and setting would make for a more compelling story. It's a little like seeing just one scene in the middle of an annoyomous movie. That said, it's a very interesting scene.
1Wat Sri-lanThe language is very descriptive, and I don't see any noticable mechanical errors.
Content wise, the context is unclear, although this is appearently intentional. Intentional or not though, a less creative audience generally won't have the patience to interpret it. Even for the rest of us, a background and setting would make for a more compelling story. It's a little like seeing just one scene in the middle of an annoyomous movie. That said, it's a very interesting scene.
12/17/2005 c1 Jill
I like it, very imaginative
I like it, very imaginative