
3/2/2012 c5 Vik Mark
I can say only one thing and that is:I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
I'm sad that it's complete, but the happy anding is amazing! I'm new here at fiction press, but I'm starting to love this place thanks to incredible stories like yours!
Keep writing, you're very good at it! ;)
I can say only one thing and that is:I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
I'm sad that it's complete, but the happy anding is amazing! I'm new here at fiction press, but I'm starting to love this place thanks to incredible stories like yours!
Keep writing, you're very good at it! ;)
8/19/2011 c5
7A-Crimson-Memory
Oh myyyyyy goodness! You just made me cry! Like they're so adorable oh my god! :) if this would have continued would they have eventually become parents?

Oh myyyyyy goodness! You just made me cry! Like they're so adorable oh my god! :) if this would have continued would they have eventually become parents?
8/19/2011 c1 A-Crimson-Memory
I think the only negative comment I have for this chapter is the fact that you went back and forth with the POV. I was sO confused I didn't understand
I think the only negative comment I have for this chapter is the fact that you went back and forth with the POV. I was sO confused I didn't understand
12/7/2010 c5 Clazziquai Project
This story is so damn cute. Roux and Lee are so perfect for each other! Aw, fluffiness! _ *flails*
This story is so damn cute. Roux and Lee are so perfect for each other! Aw, fluffiness! _ *flails*
10/17/2009 c5
2Izzylove
I'm in love with how in love they are. Bravo! But... "Stop watching my ass and to make breakfast!"
Try getting rid the "to".

I'm in love with how in love they are. Bravo! But... "Stop watching my ass and to make breakfast!"
Try getting rid the "to".
1/23/2009 c5 i-see-faeries
Aw, freakin' adorable! I love it. Lee and Roux are the epitome of cute. Much love and adoration.
Aw, freakin' adorable! I love it. Lee and Roux are the epitome of cute. Much love and adoration.
8/6/2008 c5 aripie
I just want to extend my official notice of hate towards you because all of yoru stories are chockful of freaking goodness and I almost ended up crying with this one :L
god i loved it!
thanks so much
~ari
I just want to extend my official notice of hate towards you because all of yoru stories are chockful of freaking goodness and I almost ended up crying with this one :L
god i loved it!
thanks so much
~ari
5/30/2008 c5 amber
usually I don't like pure fluff much. But this was wonderfully done. there was no feeling of ennui while reading it. Each of the chapters were interesting, poignant & cute. I liked that it had p.o.v's of both lee & roux. you have created really adorable characters who your readers can fall in love with. congrats on a very well-written story.
usually I don't like pure fluff much. But this was wonderfully done. there was no feeling of ennui while reading it. Each of the chapters were interesting, poignant & cute. I liked that it had p.o.v's of both lee & roux. you have created really adorable characters who your readers can fall in love with. congrats on a very well-written story.
5/6/2008 c5 Rayne
Oh god.
This has to e the sweetest, cutest, fluffiest most bloody adorable story I have ever read.
Awesome story =]
Oh god.
This has to e the sweetest, cutest, fluffiest most bloody adorable story I have ever read.
Awesome story =]
5/6/2008 c4 Rayne
Read this:
Lee steps into our flat and makes a bee-line for the kitchen to pack away the groceries. He's kicking off his shoes as he goes, tossing his scarf in the general direction of one of the kitchen-stools but missing it by a mile. I can't help but grin in amusement as I walk behind him, picking up the trail of clothing, shoes and plastic bags he leaves in his wake. It's like this every day, and it initially it irritated the hell out of me but I've become so used to it after living with Lee for as long as I have that it doesn't phase me anymore. I'd almost go so far as to say that I like it- almost, mind you- as it reminds me of us, and that we're together. And that the situation doesn't look as though it's going to be changing any time soon, thank god.Lee steps into our flat and makes a bee-line for the kitchen to pack away the groceries. He's kicking off his shoes as he goes, tossing his scarf in the general direction of one of the kitchen-stools but missing it by a mile. I can't help but grin in amusement as I walk behind him, picking up the trail of clothing, shoes and plastic bags he leaves in his wake. It's like this every day, and it initially it irritated the hell out of me but I've become so used to it after living with Lee for as long as I have that it doesn't phase me anymore. I'd almost go so far as to say that I like it- , mind you- as it reminds me of us, and that we're together. And that the situation doesn't look as though it's going to be changing any time soon, thank god.
You repeated this.
Read this:
Lee steps into our flat and makes a bee-line for the kitchen to pack away the groceries. He's kicking off his shoes as he goes, tossing his scarf in the general direction of one of the kitchen-stools but missing it by a mile. I can't help but grin in amusement as I walk behind him, picking up the trail of clothing, shoes and plastic bags he leaves in his wake. It's like this every day, and it initially it irritated the hell out of me but I've become so used to it after living with Lee for as long as I have that it doesn't phase me anymore. I'd almost go so far as to say that I like it- almost, mind you- as it reminds me of us, and that we're together. And that the situation doesn't look as though it's going to be changing any time soon, thank god.Lee steps into our flat and makes a bee-line for the kitchen to pack away the groceries. He's kicking off his shoes as he goes, tossing his scarf in the general direction of one of the kitchen-stools but missing it by a mile. I can't help but grin in amusement as I walk behind him, picking up the trail of clothing, shoes and plastic bags he leaves in his wake. It's like this every day, and it initially it irritated the hell out of me but I've become so used to it after living with Lee for as long as I have that it doesn't phase me anymore. I'd almost go so far as to say that I like it- , mind you- as it reminds me of us, and that we're together. And that the situation doesn't look as though it's going to be changing any time soon, thank god.
You repeated this.
12/11/2007 c5 True.Randomness
Super sweet story. I loved the mushines it had and loved the magnificent way you switch from one character to another. It was spectacular!
Super sweet story. I loved the mushines it had and loved the magnificent way you switch from one character to another. It was spectacular!
10/27/2007 c5 strawberry buttercup
i loved the bit about the cooking! so real... they're such a cute couple, and i liked the simplicity of the story, it suited the characters down to a tee. well written definetly.
i loved the bit about the cooking! so real... they're such a cute couple, and i liked the simplicity of the story, it suited the characters down to a tee. well written definetly.