4/18/2006 c1 anon
I loved this poem, it made me cry. I loved the flow of the words and your choice of words
I loved this poem, it made me cry. I loved the flow of the words and your choice of words
4/8/2006 c1 Scrunchy
Oh god.this is truly heart rending.immense congratulations on your writing.but I would like to know.W. H. O.
Oh god.this is truly heart rending.immense congratulations on your writing.but I would like to know.W. H. O.
12/18/2005 c1 me
I really like this poem. The repeitition of "brocken little girl" is a nice affect (or is it effect?)
Anyways great job, Keep writing
I really like this poem. The repeitition of "brocken little girl" is a nice affect (or is it effect?)
Anyways great job, Keep writing