
12/28/2005 c1
1AmbroseMaximilien
OMFG, I can relate to this piece... Not that my mother killed my father but they fought, the police came to the house on more than one occassion, knives were brandished, yeah.. i won't burden you with my problems but this is a very powerful piece here and i'm glad i read it ^-^

OMFG, I can relate to this piece... Not that my mother killed my father but they fought, the police came to the house on more than one occassion, knives were brandished, yeah.. i won't burden you with my problems but this is a very powerful piece here and i'm glad i read it ^-^
12/19/2005 c1
72The-Original-Neko
wow omg actauly this was great i mean it was just agreta reead it wasn'y to dtailed or to not deep it was just right

wow omg actauly this was great i mean it was just agreta reead it wasn'y to dtailed or to not deep it was just right
12/19/2005 c1
36contrast and friction
Wow. I am.. actually.. crying. That is the most heartfelt.. the most, amazing piece I have EVER read. The emotion in that.. it's truly.. I can't even think of the right words to describe how beautiful and painful that piece was. I hope that it was not something you have had to experience, and if so, I am truly sorry..Keep writing. You are very very talented.

Wow. I am.. actually.. crying. That is the most heartfelt.. the most, amazing piece I have EVER read. The emotion in that.. it's truly.. I can't even think of the right words to describe how beautiful and painful that piece was. I hope that it was not something you have had to experience, and if so, I am truly sorry..Keep writing. You are very very talented.