for Vodka and Roses6/21/2007 c1 your harbor
Eh. This story for me is alright but I don't like it nearly as much as I like Stealing Madison.
Eh. This story for me is alright but I don't like it nearly as much as I like Stealing Madison.
7/20/2006 c3 howdoesonedeleteonesprofile
sweet story! i lub it. its has a unique plot.
check out my stories!
LuVies,
SPam
sweet story! i lub it. its has a unique plot.
check out my stories!
LuVies,
SPam
7/5/2006 c3 
3Heth
This is pretty good, although I still like Stealing Madison more. I kind of want a better description Douglas and maybe Denise, too. I can't form a picture of them in my head because all I had to start with was really just the hair and eye colors. I can't figure out what their clothing styles and everything would be at all...
It's a well-written story, although I'm generally biased againsed stories written from a guys POV (probably because I could never pull it off myself). But, it did make me think how it might be kind of cool to see Stealing Madison from Jason's POV since we don't really know any of what he was thinking about Madison most of the time.
3HethThis is pretty good, although I still like Stealing Madison more. I kind of want a better description Douglas and maybe Denise, too. I can't form a picture of them in my head because all I had to start with was really just the hair and eye colors. I can't figure out what their clothing styles and everything would be at all...
It's a well-written story, although I'm generally biased againsed stories written from a guys POV (probably because I could never pull it off myself). But, it did make me think how it might be kind of cool to see Stealing Madison from Jason's POV since we don't really know any of what he was thinking about Madison most of the time.
3/26/2006 c3 Hannah O'Donnell
good chapter! keep up the good work!
good chapter! keep up the good work!
3/26/2006 c3 7sketchingaCYNiC
did i say "jane?" *smacks forehead* i probably got one character from another story confused with yours. and i'm glad you explained the age thing. i'm a soph... hmm.. well, i guess it's logical. i know a soph kid who's turning 17 this year actually... huh.
anyways, i like how the story's progressing. did i mention the pacing is terrific? not too slow, and not at the speed of light. ^_^ & i'm really curious about jill. we don't see much of her, except in this chapter. she doesn't seem mean... but hmm... i wonder, maybe douglas really did cheat on her? like maybe he was drunk or something...
hehe. that incident of alex sticking her hand down his pants was funny. xD
7sketchingaCYNiCdid i say "jane?" *smacks forehead* i probably got one character from another story confused with yours. and i'm glad you explained the age thing. i'm a soph... hmm.. well, i guess it's logical. i know a soph kid who's turning 17 this year actually... huh.
anyways, i like how the story's progressing. did i mention the pacing is terrific? not too slow, and not at the speed of light. ^_^ & i'm really curious about jill. we don't see much of her, except in this chapter. she doesn't seem mean... but hmm... i wonder, maybe douglas really did cheat on her? like maybe he was drunk or something...
hehe. that incident of alex sticking her hand down his pants was funny. xD
3/25/2006 c3 twistedFAerieTALes
:)
:)
3/25/2006 c3 Kjersti aurora borealis
Great chapter. Glad to have you back. :) Can't wait to read more! This story has *a lot* of potential! :)
Great chapter. Glad to have you back. :) Can't wait to read more! This story has *a lot* of potential! :)
3/24/2006 c3 5incognitus
Hey this story looks interesting, I realy like reading it. Denise sounds a lot like my own sister, cos I hate it too when she's always on the same brain wave as me.
And I just found out you're in Singapore! Wow that's how small the world is, cos I live here too. If you don't mind me asking, which school are you at right now?
5incognitusHey this story looks interesting, I realy like reading it. Denise sounds a lot like my own sister, cos I hate it too when she's always on the same brain wave as me.
And I just found out you're in Singapore! Wow that's how small the world is, cos I live here too. If you don't mind me asking, which school are you at right now?