for Feline Theory12/20/2006 c3 sam
butthead u really do live up to ur pen name dnt you? and bleedingair if I was shedevil then trust me I wudnt be using a review bin to shut you up. idiots both of u!
butthead u really do live up to ur pen name dnt you? and bleedingair if I was shedevil then trust me I wudnt be using a review bin to shut you up. idiots both of u!
12/19/2006 c1 bot on speed
lmfaoo. it's not naffi?
holyshiett
HAHA.
thats funny.yy.
i mean what were the odds that she'd read your review and reply backk.
HAHAHAH
-laughs some more.
you're not on when im on so
so
so stfu.
-humps.
lmfaoo. it's not naffi?
holyshiett
HAHA.
thats funny.yy.
i mean what were the odds that she'd read your review and reply backk.
HAHAHAH
-laughs some more.
you're not on when im on so
so
so stfu.
-humps.
12/18/2006 c2 bleedingair
hey iman babe. haha. sorry for flooding up your reviews (but it makes you look cooler!)... (til they get read)
btw, that sam shedevil muffinman isn't naffi. she (or he?) is just some random chiquita i PMSed out on.
(she called her review cc and gave me a briefing, ggaerdaeabcdefg ahaha kay)
get online sometime. -LOVE PUDDLES-
hey iman babe. haha. sorry for flooding up your reviews (but it makes you look cooler!)... (til they get read)
btw, that sam shedevil muffinman isn't naffi. she (or he?) is just some random chiquita i PMSed out on.
(she called her review cc and gave me a briefing, ggaerdaeabcdefg ahaha kay)
get online sometime. -LOVE PUDDLES-
12/14/2006 c1 BOT
you&naffi are retarded
HAHAHAHA
losers
LOSERS.
get out of my review bin.
& pee es;
-is very much offended.
i didnt copy that story, missay. i have no idea what ur talking about.
-doesnt.
no really.
i apologize for any similaritees.
peepes. is sam naffi?
you&naffi are retarded
HAHAHAHA
losers
LOSERS.
get out of my review bin.
& pee es;
-is very much offended.
i didnt copy that story, missay. i have no idea what ur talking about.
-doesnt.
no really.
i apologize for any similaritees.
peepes. is sam naffi?
12/10/2006 c2 sam
the comment wasnt given to bully you bleedingair. jus remember that fictionpress is not just for authors to publish thier work but to also gain feedback and thats what i was doing. if you've got nothing better than to do than jus sit there and make comments that are not useful then i suggest you keep them to yourself. Thers no need to get defense jus becoz someone makes a critical comment of the story you happen to like. Grow-up its only a sotry. You're not the author of this story so dnt try to act like it.
the comment wasnt given to bully you bleedingair. jus remember that fictionpress is not just for authors to publish thier work but to also gain feedback and thats what i was doing. if you've got nothing better than to do than jus sit there and make comments that are not useful then i suggest you keep them to yourself. Thers no need to get defense jus becoz someone makes a critical comment of the story you happen to like. Grow-up its only a sotry. You're not the author of this story so dnt try to act like it.
12/10/2006 c1 bleedingair
uh oh. somebody needs a hug :(
uh oh. somebody needs a hug :(
12/10/2006 c1 sam
please 'shut-up' bleedingair and find something more useful to do rather than criticising other people's opinions. its an opinion and so get over ur self coz u cannot stop people from giving thier opinions on stories..its a part of fictionpress so grow up!
please 'shut-up' bleedingair and find something more useful to do rather than criticising other people's opinions. its an opinion and so get over ur self coz u cannot stop people from giving thier opinions on stories..its a part of fictionpress so grow up!
12/8/2006 c4 bleedingair
please slap "sam".
please slap "sam".
10/22/2006 c4 sam
This story is very much like a book I read, where the lead is a panther connecting ties with ancient Egypt but she doesnt know that yet and keeps having dreams of that ancient society. She mets a guy and his group of friends and slowly the lead guy shows her exactly what she is, while showing her that he too is the same. Later you find out he gained her trust and made her fall in love with him as a part of plan to trap her. To break the ancient society's curse which she had placed upon on every member of the society. The book was in triology and I hope this isnt the same as that and you actually have some original stuff. Good Luck for it..will keep reading to find out what happens next! xx
This story is very much like a book I read, where the lead is a panther connecting ties with ancient Egypt but she doesnt know that yet and keeps having dreams of that ancient society. She mets a guy and his group of friends and slowly the lead guy shows her exactly what she is, while showing her that he too is the same. Later you find out he gained her trust and made her fall in love with him as a part of plan to trap her. To break the ancient society's curse which she had placed upon on every member of the society. The book was in triology and I hope this isnt the same as that and you actually have some original stuff. Good Luck for it..will keep reading to find out what happens next! xx
8/27/2006 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
I like the beginning description of the setting. Fantastically written!
I like the beginning description of the setting. Fantastically written!
7/9/2006 c4 
9Bleeding Air
I love how you know there is something so wrong about leila before you ever say it, & all the hints you throw are subtle, but in the same way, obvious. the toothache.. the weariness.. the way she can detect things.. it’s just neat.
I liked johnny & leila’s first meeting. awkward.. & then as their meetings progress, you show their interactions so well. the character development, I mean. it’s done well. how in chapter two [3] she is still wary around him, but she isn’t afraid to snap, either. & how she’s unconsciously putting her trust in him, what with telling him about the rabbit she killed, & then realizing her mistake. it’s all so realistic.
& his eyes were described so.. awesomely. yeah, couldn’t find the.. uh. right word. hah. iono; the hunger.
“It made him mad? I thought it made him hungry.” LOL! & yeah, the animal talk. sho mysterioush.
“‘My name’s Frank, by the way!’ I don’t care.” haha, cute.
I like sarah. she’s creepy, but I like her. I wonder what they are. they’re obviously animalistic, probably feline judging by the title. they’ve got the instinct & the eyes. I’m assuming they’re something you made up?
& whoo. is leila what they are? or are they what leila is? hah.
I think the comfort leila feels around sarah has to do with them being similar. so maybe they are the same thing as her.
hahaha, paterson’s amusing.
& ouch.. that scene in the bathroom was hard to read. I was cringing during it. just.. ew.
& johnny almost let it slip. he almost said sarah’s name. haha. & it was so cute, how he bought he a bear. at first I thought it was an actual bear, & I was like.. k..? & I think it’s so adorable that she accepts him! I wonder what evilness ensues from this miracle.. dunanana.
& why is it that almost everyone has glasses, even the bear? is there a reason for this..
9Bleeding AirI love how you know there is something so wrong about leila before you ever say it, & all the hints you throw are subtle, but in the same way, obvious. the toothache.. the weariness.. the way she can detect things.. it’s just neat.
I liked johnny & leila’s first meeting. awkward.. & then as their meetings progress, you show their interactions so well. the character development, I mean. it’s done well. how in chapter two [3] she is still wary around him, but she isn’t afraid to snap, either. & how she’s unconsciously putting her trust in him, what with telling him about the rabbit she killed, & then realizing her mistake. it’s all so realistic.
& his eyes were described so.. awesomely. yeah, couldn’t find the.. uh. right word. hah. iono; the hunger.
“It made him mad? I thought it made him hungry.” LOL! & yeah, the animal talk. sho mysterioush.
“‘My name’s Frank, by the way!’ I don’t care.” haha, cute.
I like sarah. she’s creepy, but I like her. I wonder what they are. they’re obviously animalistic, probably feline judging by the title. they’ve got the instinct & the eyes. I’m assuming they’re something you made up?
& whoo. is leila what they are? or are they what leila is? hah.
I think the comfort leila feels around sarah has to do with them being similar. so maybe they are the same thing as her.
hahaha, paterson’s amusing.
& ouch.. that scene in the bathroom was hard to read. I was cringing during it. just.. ew.
& johnny almost let it slip. he almost said sarah’s name. haha. & it was so cute, how he bought he a bear. at first I thought it was an actual bear, & I was like.. k..? & I think it’s so adorable that she accepts him! I wonder what evilness ensues from this miracle.. dunanana.
& why is it that almost everyone has glasses, even the bear? is there a reason for this..
7/6/2006 c4 4mishiema
Oh dear. I think I love you.
This is fantabulous story you have coming here. And because I'm a lazy lurker-esque individual, I guess I'll just rave about 'He Punks Me Not' here. It made me cry. Honest. I was bawling at the last two chapters and my dad was all, "What the heck are you reading?" Quite funny I suppose, but my nose was very, very snotty after that.
I also love your 'Queen of Cliche' profile. And your pennames. Both of them. Ha, I'm such an internet stalker. Anyhow, I am muslim as well, yay. But anyways, I love your writing. It makes me very happy and yet it still makes me cry. Now THAT is talented writing.
Cheers,~Mishiema
4mishiemaOh dear. I think I love you.
This is fantabulous story you have coming here. And because I'm a lazy lurker-esque individual, I guess I'll just rave about 'He Punks Me Not' here. It made me cry. Honest. I was bawling at the last two chapters and my dad was all, "What the heck are you reading?" Quite funny I suppose, but my nose was very, very snotty after that.
I also love your 'Queen of Cliche' profile. And your pennames. Both of them. Ha, I'm such an internet stalker. Anyhow, I am muslim as well, yay. But anyways, I love your writing. It makes me very happy and yet it still makes me cry. Now THAT is talented writing.
Cheers,~Mishiema
6/7/2006 c4 hellokittygirl
Dude! I love this story! It truly is written well. Update soon. I absolutely adore it. =]
-Lqd
Dude! I love this story! It truly is written well. Update soon. I absolutely adore it. =]
-Lqd
3/13/2006 c1 5Darwin
A very interesting start to a story..What is so interesting about a house at the end of the street in Arlinton, Texas.
I have been to Dallas and Fort Worth, but I never knew of Arlington in between them. Interesting that I am just as blaize as the rest of society~
As dedicated as you are to BBQ's "Blanchefleur Legacy," I was wondering if you would be interested in reading mine?
I am not going to say that it will compare to the intricacy of her work, but "Only Half" has its own merits. BBQ has been one of my biggest supporters in the past, and I could use some more reviewers. (Who couldn't right?)
Thank you in advance if you choose to pop over and read and review!
I will be back to read more of this work...Very interesting start...I want to see what exactly we are talking about here!
Darwin
5DarwinA very interesting start to a story..What is so interesting about a house at the end of the street in Arlinton, Texas.
I have been to Dallas and Fort Worth, but I never knew of Arlington in between them. Interesting that I am just as blaize as the rest of society~
As dedicated as you are to BBQ's "Blanchefleur Legacy," I was wondering if you would be interested in reading mine?
I am not going to say that it will compare to the intricacy of her work, but "Only Half" has its own merits. BBQ has been one of my biggest supporters in the past, and I could use some more reviewers. (Who couldn't right?)
Thank you in advance if you choose to pop over and read and review!
I will be back to read more of this work...Very interesting start...I want to see what exactly we are talking about here!
Darwin