for Feline Theory2/14/2006 c2 BadSweets
Johnny's such a nerd. I love him. Hahaha, it's so easy to say that about fictional characters, 'cause you never have to prove it.
Er, anyway, the air of mystery is killing me. What's going to happen? It has something to do with cats. Can't wait on how we're going to find out...
Johnny's such a nerd. I love him. Hahaha, it's so easy to say that about fictional characters, 'cause you never have to prove it.
Er, anyway, the air of mystery is killing me. What's going to happen? It has something to do with cats. Can't wait on how we're going to find out...
2/10/2006 c4 
16themeanreds
I like Leila. She's so interesting. I love your descriptions of when she changes and stuff. Pretty intense. Nice work!
16themeanredsI like Leila. She's so interesting. I love your descriptions of when she changes and stuff. Pretty intense. Nice work!
2/8/2006 c4 PiNk DUck FrauD
Leila accepted somebody? o.0 It's a miracle! And what's with the incisors? While reading I had this bizzarre image of her with teeth like my dog... anything alike? Interesting story and I'm glad to hear it will move faster. XD
Leila accepted somebody? o.0 It's a miracle! And what's with the incisors? While reading I had this bizzarre image of her with teeth like my dog... anything alike? Interesting story and I'm glad to hear it will move faster. XD
2/6/2006 c4 1For What Its Worth
she trusts someone? that is so sweet! and he deigned to visit her at her home! bearing a gift! pardon the pun. and wasnt all that slow. whens the next chapter? lol i eagerly anticipate it!
1For What Its Worthshe trusts someone? that is so sweet! and he deigned to visit her at her home! bearing a gift! pardon the pun. and wasnt all that slow. whens the next chapter? lol i eagerly anticipate it!
2/2/2006 c4 3papermache
You're story is completely unique, and I can't wait to figure out more of the plot. I just spotted a typo somewhere in the jello and pudding section where you accidentally put hello. But besides all the technical stuff, I really like your story.
3papermacheYou're story is completely unique, and I can't wait to figure out more of the plot. I just spotted a typo somewhere in the jello and pudding section where you accidentally put hello. But besides all the technical stuff, I really like your story.
2/2/2006 c4 WhamBamThankYouMam
Nice nice, update update. Don't forget your other fic either though.
Is this going to jump time as in have the school bits as the first part and then when he comes back as the second?
Nice nice, update update. Don't forget your other fic either though.
Is this going to jump time as in have the school bits as the first part and then when he comes back as the second?
2/2/2006 c4 1happiness by the kilowatt
Wow that was intense! Very exciting chapter with the whole crazy teeth thing. Will be interesting to find out what she is exactly. And how she differs from the others.
Good to see that she's finally relaxing with Johnny, even though I don't fully trust him.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
1happiness by the kilowattWow that was intense! Very exciting chapter with the whole crazy teeth thing. Will be interesting to find out what she is exactly. And how she differs from the others.
Good to see that she's finally relaxing with Johnny, even though I don't fully trust him.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
2/1/2006 c4 Disoriented Waste
I think this was your best chater, because you're past that, kind of prologish explanitory state. And I can just visualise blood gushing from her lips spewing in a vomitous way and the sound of water dripping in the background contrasting against the blood smashing to the floor...
Erm yes. I have a white polar bear, sigh, so cute...
We really need a peace keeper of the sacred here. Sigh and le.
Anyhoo. Good job chica. Keep it up.
I think this was your best chater, because you're past that, kind of prologish explanitory state. And I can just visualise blood gushing from her lips spewing in a vomitous way and the sound of water dripping in the background contrasting against the blood smashing to the floor...
Erm yes. I have a white polar bear, sigh, so cute...
We really need a peace keeper of the sacred here. Sigh and le.
Anyhoo. Good job chica. Keep it up.
1/28/2006 c3 for what its worth
that was sad. very sad. shes so lonely!
that was sad. very sad. shes so lonely!
1/28/2006 c2 For What Its Worth
oh, now im intrigued! nice vague hints!
oh, now im intrigued! nice vague hints!
1/28/2006 c1 For What Its Worth
this is so totally awesome! continue, continue! lolol
this is so totally awesome! continue, continue! lolol
1/27/2006 c3 4somethingsup
This is awesome, just like all your stories are. Leila's different as far as characters go, and I like her a lot. Update soon. ^_^
4somethingsupThis is awesome, just like all your stories are. Leila's different as far as characters go, and I like her a lot. Update soon. ^_^
1/22/2006 c3 Mahveen
Are you actually from Arlington? Cuz, you and me would be pretty close.
Nice story, btw. Completely different from HPMN, but good.
Johnny sounds like a cool character.
3 chapters in one month...thanks!
Mahveen
Are you actually from Arlington? Cuz, you and me would be pretty close.
Nice story, btw. Completely different from HPMN, but good.
Johnny sounds like a cool character.
3 chapters in one month...thanks!
Mahveen