for Feline Theory12/31/2005 c1 PiNk DUck FrauD
And I've found you, even with a different pen name! You'll never escape me, HA HA! Anyway, this sounds like a terrific read and a lot of scenery description here, mostly about the area and love the multi-colored pairs of eyes.
This reminds me of a couple books I've read recently: Tithe and Valiant by Holly Black. Ever heard of them? It's kind of a fantasy thing.. and that's what these creatures are giving me ideas of. I'm adding this to my favorites! The summary's kick ass.
And I've found you, even with a different pen name! You'll never escape me, HA HA! Anyway, this sounds like a terrific read and a lot of scenery description here, mostly about the area and love the multi-colored pairs of eyes.
This reminds me of a couple books I've read recently: Tithe and Valiant by Holly Black. Ever heard of them? It's kind of a fantasy thing.. and that's what these creatures are giving me ideas of. I'm adding this to my favorites! The summary's kick ass.
12/31/2005 c1 
2Eldibe
Interesting so far, but it's just the preliminary introduction. So yeah, I can't really determine how it is so far. But I read your other stories, and have confidence in your plots. You are a very entertaining writer, you know.
And yeah. It's weird how long it takes people to realize that an author has just started another story. I'm pretty much waiting for the flow of comments to come rolling in after that HPMN update (good job on that, by the way. realistic). You really shouldn't worry about your updates so much - your readers are hooked. And a few months of wait will do them good.
Fuck, it's late. Happy new year!
2EldibeInteresting so far, but it's just the preliminary introduction. So yeah, I can't really determine how it is so far. But I read your other stories, and have confidence in your plots. You are a very entertaining writer, you know.
And yeah. It's weird how long it takes people to realize that an author has just started another story. I'm pretty much waiting for the flow of comments to come rolling in after that HPMN update (good job on that, by the way. realistic). You really shouldn't worry about your updates so much - your readers are hooked. And a few months of wait will do them good.
Fuck, it's late. Happy new year!
12/31/2005 c1 8BadSweets
Wow, I sort of really liked the intro. It felt like a movie I was seeing and your writing was the narrator's voice.
Nice intro! It heightens my curiosity to a crazy extent, and I absolutely adore cats. Continue it!
8BadSweetsWow, I sort of really liked the intro. It felt like a movie I was seeing and your writing was the narrator's voice.
Nice intro! It heightens my curiosity to a crazy extent, and I absolutely adore cats. Continue it!
12/31/2005 c1 15j.u.s.t. .f.o.r. .m.e
the prologue was interesting, very mysterious, not too much has been revealed so i can't say if i like it or not... but yeah, you should keep on writing for this one, it sounds really interesting
great work, update soon (HPMN) ;)
15j.u.s.t. .f.o.r. .m.ethe prologue was interesting, very mysterious, not too much has been revealed so i can't say if i like it or not... but yeah, you should keep on writing for this one, it sounds really interesting
great work, update soon (HPMN) ;)
12/31/2005 c1 2Destiny Violet
This story sounds really cool! Your writing style suits the story perfectly, almost like a story book. I can't wait to read more.
2Destiny VioletThis story sounds really cool! Your writing style suits the story perfectly, almost like a story book. I can't wait to read more.
12/28/2005 c1 FromEastToWest
wow. i really liked it. it fits as a prologue. all this suspense.. you have to keep it up, don't let this story go to hell. I was(am) a faithful reader of He Punks Me Not. PLEASE, DO continue witht his one.
Thank you!
wow. i really liked it. it fits as a prologue. all this suspense.. you have to keep it up, don't let this story go to hell. I was(am) a faithful reader of He Punks Me Not. PLEASE, DO continue witht his one.
Thank you!
12/24/2005 c1 Maymuna
OMG!That is so cool. I was really fixed on it and I really like the fact that you chose such a small town like Arlington, in which I presently reside might I add, as the basis of your story. You're a really good writer. You should think about pursuing it later in life.
OMG!That is so cool. I was really fixed on it and I really like the fact that you chose such a small town like Arlington, in which I presently reside might I add, as the basis of your story. You're a really good writer. You should think about pursuing it later in life.
12/22/2005 c1 9Bleeding Air
the title, and the summary, are so veryvery effective. i was wondering what it would be like if you started a story like this.
i love the casuality of the prologue. extremely well done; almost ironic, really.
i can't wait to meet the main character, and the "him" mentioned in the summary. you have me really interested, and that was mainly by the summary. greatness. hah.
ps: love how you distinguished each creature by their eyes!
9Bleeding Airthe title, and the summary, are so veryvery effective. i was wondering what it would be like if you started a story like this.
i love the casuality of the prologue. extremely well done; almost ironic, really.
i can't wait to meet the main character, and the "him" mentioned in the summary. you have me really interested, and that was mainly by the summary. greatness. hah.
ps: love how you distinguished each creature by their eyes!
12/21/2005 c1 Anna
I've been WAITING for you to start another story (though I'm still waiting for HPMN to be updated...*hint, hint* ^_^) You're writing is so good, I love it. I'm getting the feeling that these aren't ordinary animals. Werewolves? (Just guessing...been reading too much fantasy lately.)
I've been WAITING for you to start another story (though I'm still waiting for HPMN to be updated...*hint, hint* ^_^) You're writing is so good, I love it. I'm getting the feeling that these aren't ordinary animals. Werewolves? (Just guessing...been reading too much fantasy lately.)
12/20/2005 c1 7Alexis Kent
Very intriguing. I like it. Do remember, though, that the possessive form of "it" has no apostrophe. :)
Please update soon.
7Alexis KentVery intriguing. I like it. Do remember, though, that the possessive form of "it" has no apostrophe. :)
Please update soon.