for And I Dreamt1/24/2006 c1 
237classic violet
That last line... *whistle* Beautiful! Spectacular. Written perfectly. Loved this poem.
237classic violetThat last line... *whistle* Beautiful! Spectacular. Written perfectly. Loved this poem.
1/17/2006 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Hehe, this was pretty sweet! Your pretty good with these humor pieces!^_^
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionHehe, this was pretty sweet! Your pretty good with these humor pieces!^_^
1/14/2006 c1 6Gilee7
LOL. This one really is cute. And it once again has that sarcastic tone to it. Clever poem.
6Gilee7LOL. This one really is cute. And it once again has that sarcastic tone to it. Clever poem.
1/13/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Great spin off of a comon phrase. The last line just really brings it home, Marvelous.
879Moondog DozierGreat spin off of a comon phrase. The last line just really brings it home, Marvelous.
1/13/2006 c1 15Callipygian
hehe, nice.You're so clevern_nI can't remember any of my dreams...do I dream at all?They say the insane don't dream n_nso I guess my answer is : No
15Callipygianhehe, nice.You're so clevern_nI can't remember any of my dreams...do I dream at all?They say the insane don't dream n_nso I guess my answer is : No
1/6/2006 c1 90Dragonzz
it's official. you're going on my fave authors list whether you like it or not. Awesome. Keep it up
~dragonzz~
90Dragonzzit's official. you're going on my fave authors list whether you like it or not. Awesome. Keep it up
~dragonzz~
1/4/2006 c1 1Meg Schick
i liked this a lot. quick thinking with the "Sweet dreams are boring." i'm not that quick... nice job.~MegP.S. thanks for the review
1Meg Schicki liked this a lot. quick thinking with the "Sweet dreams are boring." i'm not that quick... nice job.~MegP.S. thanks for the review
1/1/2006 c1 12eighteen hundred
I think this would work wonderfully with just the first four lines, though as is, not bad at all. Good stuff.
12eighteen hundredI think this would work wonderfully with just the first four lines, though as is, not bad at all. Good stuff.
12/27/2005 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
Nice. It sounds like a "true story." SOrry this is a short review, but, you know, it's a short poem. I like the "May you have dreams with good plots" line. Perhaps a bit more useless rhetoric, just to make it pretty? Or not. Good job.
Nice. It sounds like a "true story." SOrry this is a short review, but, you know, it's a short poem. I like the "May you have dreams with good plots" line. Perhaps a bit more useless rhetoric, just to make it pretty? Or not. Good job.
12/24/2005 c1 43i call it laughable
that struck something fluffy in me. hah. i loved your response to him, "'Sweet dreams are boring.'" haha. aren't they?
43i call it laughablethat struck something fluffy in me. hah. i loved your response to him, "'Sweet dreams are boring.'" haha. aren't they?
12/22/2005 c1 Ryustorm
Its really cute!sunshine in the basement! i have dreams with plots, only weird ones.it made me laugh.p.s. thanks for your review on death
Its really cute!sunshine in the basement! i have dreams with plots, only weird ones.it made me laugh.p.s. thanks for your review on death
12/20/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
cute. as. HELL.
I can barely contain myself, I'd have totally angsted this up if I'd written this.
I love it.
gorgeous, gorgeous poem.
~* noelle
90poetic abortioncute. as. HELL.
I can barely contain myself, I'd have totally angsted this up if I'd written this.
I love it.
gorgeous, gorgeous poem.
~* noelle