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12/24/2005 c1 9Glittering Innocence
Very intense!

I love people who do that kind of writing!

KEEP UP THOSE REVIEWS!
12/24/2005 c1 27Persufala
o, i like it, i like it a lot. i understand. your descriptions and imagery rock.
12/23/2005 c1 Shiny Toy Guns
Hey its nice!
12/23/2005 c1 20WestFullMoon
The feelings are present, I can sense that from this wonderful piece. I adore the last line:

"Oh why do I dare to love you?"

Makes the reades kind of wonder...But anyways, I hope you stop feeling crappy! ^_^
12/19/2005 c1 a lonely september
this was great. i could feel the pain & i really liked it. not the pain, the poem. lol...'My stupid heart for beating on when I’ve been telling it to stopFor the stupid dreams that plague me with their vague foretellingBullet through the filled up brainSplatter my blood like the surging of pain through my neck and skull'nice job there...

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