
12/21/2005 c1
7HermitInMyOwnHead
Cool concept, thought-out and written down well. The last line was ace, an excellent wrap-up. :) One thing, perhaps you should have separated the paragraph into many, it would be an easier read and a smoother flow. Awesome little piece though. Have a nice day. :)

Cool concept, thought-out and written down well. The last line was ace, an excellent wrap-up. :) One thing, perhaps you should have separated the paragraph into many, it would be an easier read and a smoother flow. Awesome little piece though. Have a nice day. :)