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3/6/2006 c1 4Jacqueline Stem
I love the line "An unspoken connection between these two objects". Very cool. JS
1/24/2006 c1 237classic violet
"This unspoken connection wasn’t there at all"

That line was so good. As is this poem.
1/23/2006 c1 96Briar's Thorn
i have to dissagree with that one because belive you me it happened, and oddly enough it was when he was playing the guitar for me...any who...very well written the only line that didn't seem to fit was 'they never are therethey're just make believe' it dosn't flow with the poem but other than that nice jog! keep up the good work!

Thorn
12/30/2005 c1 20sloppy firsts
pretty and sad.
12/29/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
This is very sad and unpredictable. I thought at first that it was a hopeful poem until it came to the ending. BOOM. Shocker. Anyways, I love the approach.
12/20/2005 c1 hey maria
"Look, mummy, there's an airplane up in the sky!" - Pink Floyd.

Your pen-name made me think of that.

I like your poem, by the way. It was lovely.

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