for YOU12/20/2005 c1 
24she's not breathing
*claps hands* ... hi, again. i love this. lovelove it. the length of it helps it to make that much more of an impact. i love how much of this is a dream, how you used clouds in the imagery that goes on to include wings - it ties it all in really well. lovely final line, as well. reading this made me smile & want to sigh. nice work capturing the emotion.
~k8
24she's not breathing*claps hands* ... hi, again. i love this. lovelove it. the length of it helps it to make that much more of an impact. i love how much of this is a dream, how you used clouds in the imagery that goes on to include wings - it ties it all in really well. lovely final line, as well. reading this made me smile & want to sigh. nice work capturing the emotion.
~k8