for Haiku Attempt12/29/2005 c1 
17life like whoa
*points to "She's not breathing" review*
couldn't have said it better myself, even if I tried.
17life like whoa*points to "She's not breathing" review*
couldn't have said it better myself, even if I tried.
12/20/2005 c1 24she's not breathing
i love the spin you've taken on this. you're ... shoving what people do back in their faces when they're being angsty & drama-ridden without really condemning them. lovelove it, because no one can really argue what you're saying in this poem. "Make it worth the gag" - there aren't many lines that hit so hard without need for expansion at all.
~k8
24she's not breathingi love the spin you've taken on this. you're ... shoving what people do back in their faces when they're being angsty & drama-ridden without really condemning them. lovelove it, because no one can really argue what you're saying in this poem. "Make it worth the gag" - there aren't many lines that hit so hard without need for expansion at all.
~k8