
12/29/2005 c1
17life like whoa
This poem is beautifuly written.It flows perfectly and the lines
"She might as well flip her hairAnd proudly utter "I know"At least then, her words, wouldn't be so empty."
give the poem a superb ending. This is definitely going on my fave's list.
*I forgot to thank you for your review!so...thank you!*

This poem is beautifuly written.It flows perfectly and the lines
"She might as well flip her hairAnd proudly utter "I know"At least then, her words, wouldn't be so empty."
give the poem a superb ending. This is definitely going on my fave's list.
*I forgot to thank you for your review!so...thank you!*