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12/29/2005 c1 17life like whoa
This poem is beautifuly written.It flows perfectly and the lines

"She might as well flip her hairAnd proudly utter "I know"At least then, her words, wouldn't be so empty."

give the poem a superb ending. This is definitely going on my fave's list.

*I forgot to thank you for your review!so...thank you!*
12/20/2005 c1 19ColdFrost
Very good - the epitome of some of the people I know. The repetition of "and she thanked the girl flippantly" is very effective, and catches the whole poem for me.


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