
12/29/2005 c1
17life like whoa
I don't have a large range in my vocabulary so some of the words threw me off...(sorry for my adolecent mind)But what I did gather was beautiful.
"So, get undressed and spend the night and speak until I'm deaf.
That has to be my favorite line, along with many others, but that would cause for this entire poem to be rewritten and that would be too long of a review. Amazing poem

I don't have a large range in my vocabulary so some of the words threw me off...(sorry for my adolecent mind)But what I did gather was beautiful.
"So, get undressed and spend the night and speak until I'm deaf.
That has to be my favorite line, along with many others, but that would cause for this entire poem to be rewritten and that would be too long of a review. Amazing poem