for Pain12/22/2005 c1 
39SliversofSilverPain
Wow... this has so much emotion. well written! "hurt and sorrow engraved on my face' I love the use of engraved there!
39SliversofSilverPainWow... this has so much emotion. well written! "hurt and sorrow engraved on my face' I love the use of engraved there!
12/21/2005 c1 879Moondog Dozier
very descriptive and portrays the emotion well. Takes the abstract "PAIN" and makes it concrete with the barrage of images. Well done.
879Moondog Doziervery descriptive and portrays the emotion well. Takes the abstract "PAIN" and makes it concrete with the barrage of images. Well done.
12/21/2005 c1 73Bitch Du Jour
Oh my goodness! You put into words exactly how I've felt dozens of times. Bravo! Seems we've got a similar writing style, as well. ^_~
73Bitch Du JourOh my goodness! You put into words exactly how I've felt dozens of times. Bravo! Seems we've got a similar writing style, as well. ^_~