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for Pain

3/17/2006 c1 46fall3nang3l
Loved it. It was totally me!

Keep writing!
12/22/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
Wow... this has so much emotion. well written! "hurt and sorrow engraved on my face' I love the use of engraved there!
12/21/2005 c1 2blatant-sneak
a bit cliche, but i liked the "desperation, an obedient dog" part
12/21/2005 c1 879Moondog Dozier
very descriptive and portrays the emotion well. Takes the abstract "PAIN" and makes it concrete with the barrage of images. Well done.
12/21/2005 c1 73Bitch Du Jour
Oh my goodness! You put into words exactly how I've felt dozens of times. Bravo! Seems we've got a similar writing style, as well. ^_~
12/21/2005 c1 20sloppy firsts
the emotions you've evoked were just beautiful.

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