for Life's Edge1/30/2006 c1 DukeOfJazz
I love it.
The Imagery is perfect and is so true to life.
I love how you start and end it with the short sensitive, almost instinctive rambling iner thoughts.
I love it.
The Imagery is perfect and is so true to life.
I love how you start and end it with the short sensitive, almost instinctive rambling iner thoughts.
12/23/2005 c1 
124in theory
Hmm, there aint nothing wrong with this! It's maybe a bit depressing, but so is a hell of a lot of great fiction. I like it. The main character does feel a bit..lonely. But besides that it's great. x
124in theoryHmm, there aint nothing wrong with this! It's maybe a bit depressing, but so is a hell of a lot of great fiction. I like it. The main character does feel a bit..lonely. But besides that it's great. x
12/22/2005 c1 11Bee-wytching
It's sad definitely, but tragically beautiful. It's like you're letting us peek into your diary. I like it. Keep it going.
11Bee-wytchingIt's sad definitely, but tragically beautiful. It's like you're letting us peek into your diary. I like it. Keep it going.