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8Kana-sama
I love the way you kept the theme going all through the poem. A lot of people can't do that for some reason.
Once again, this is very well written. Beautiful. (^^)
8Kana-samaI love the way you kept the theme going all through the poem. A lot of people can't do that for some reason.
Once again, this is very well written. Beautiful. (^^)
12/29/2005 c1 17sixPAC
I love your writing because i can realate so well to your words, and if others can relate you no your writing is good
17sixPACI love your writing because i can realate so well to your words, and if others can relate you no your writing is good
12/22/2005 c1 8Bottled Colours
You did have good visualizations. Another good one. I hope to read another one.
8Bottled ColoursYou did have good visualizations. Another good one. I hope to read another one.
12/22/2005 c1 118lostandwandering
wow. that was a very great poem. you had great visualization. keep it up.
118lostandwanderingwow. that was a very great poem. you had great visualization. keep it up.