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2/26/2006 c1 195t-t-t-ouch
Thanks a lot for the reveiw. Im glad to know someone can recognize the feelings and emotions i was trying to get past.

I love this poem. Especially the whole, breathe in, breathe out...sometimes its the only thing that helps.

All in all, a wonderful job. Bravo.
1/6/2006 c1 24Lunatics Words
a very lovely poem, well put together, and very interesting...-Luna-Tic-
1/3/2006 c1 12The Smoke
I like the way you worded this, and I like your use of repetition. Well done.
12/31/2005 c1 42CelestialWind
I like this piece. I can see that you're starting your works...keep it up! You definately have some talent.
12/29/2005 c1 17sixPAC
This is by far my favourite, the breathe in, breathe out concept works so well with this, i get alot from this as to me it describes life and its pain it can bring and how we go day by day through life with alot of weight on our sholders, awesome poem dude
12/27/2005 c1 24Valentine's Disease
this is very powerful.
12/26/2005 c1 domino13710
Love the repition of breathe out, breathe in- and how it reverses at the end. Very clever.
12/22/2005 c1 8Bottled Colours
This is good. I like the whole "Staring at nothing, losing time, but thinking of everything." Keep it up! ^^ Very nice.

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