
2/8/2006 c1
12Dianna Lopes
This took my breath away. It's going into the favs. Definitely keep it up!

This took my breath away. It's going into the favs. Definitely keep it up!
1/13/2006 c1
11les petits bateaux
Very intensifying and tragic imagery, but your descriptions were hauntingly beautiful. I love the line "I'll show the sun a pretty picture within my eyes. Black eyes." That's very deep. Superbly written.

Very intensifying and tragic imagery, but your descriptions were hauntingly beautiful. I love the line "I'll show the sun a pretty picture within my eyes. Black eyes." That's very deep. Superbly written.
1/3/2006 c1
19Kat-Renee Kittel
The contrast in this piece is superb...deeply tragic & deeply moving.
Write On! -Katie

The contrast in this piece is superb...deeply tragic & deeply moving.
Write On! -Katie
12/31/2005 c1
87Chaos Apple
The imagery in this is just so powerful, it's staggering. This is amazing, keep up the great work!

The imagery in this is just so powerful, it's staggering. This is amazing, keep up the great work!
12/22/2005 c1
34xHarlequinx
enticingly tragic imagery. I think this deserves a spot on my favorites list. Thank you.

enticingly tragic imagery. I think this deserves a spot on my favorites list. Thank you.