for Fallen Angel7/12/2007 c1 StoneSeraphim
pretty! i love enjambment, some of my stuff uses it because it's so fun to write. the vivd imagery is compelling, it actually put pictures in my head. two thumbs up!
pretty! i love enjambment, some of my stuff uses it because it's so fun to write. the vivd imagery is compelling, it actually put pictures in my head. two thumbs up!
5/9/2006 c1 
1m.friday
The emotion is beautiful! Really well written (I'm not very descriptive, am I?), and I actually prefer non-rhyming poems. Really sad and moving.
Air
1m.fridayThe emotion is beautiful! Really well written (I'm not very descriptive, am I?), and I actually prefer non-rhyming poems. Really sad and moving.
Air
4/23/2006 c1 20Lilliana Krishante
Quite visual and harsh. Full of very dark emotions. It moved me. Especially the last paragraph. Great.
20Lilliana KrishanteQuite visual and harsh. Full of very dark emotions. It moved me. Especially the last paragraph. Great.
3/24/2006 c1 11Me 4 eva
I loved the emotion. It like popped out of the page and turned with a twist before you even knew it. Great writing.Thanks for the review btw.
11Me 4 evaI loved the emotion. It like popped out of the page and turned with a twist before you even knew it. Great writing.Thanks for the review btw.
3/3/2006 c1 Absynthe Greene
I love it, it's so beautiful, and so painfilled, and sounds like like one of my own stories (not posted on this site).
the works of a talented writer.
Revinita
I love it, it's so beautiful, and so painfilled, and sounds like like one of my own stories (not posted on this site).
the works of a talented writer.
Revinita
2/5/2006 c1 2Sheila Ibre
*heck, if i could define poetry, i could define LoVE. But really, even a rocket-scientist can't do it right. no justice to definition. (if you're wonderin gwhat i'm blabbering abt, it's coz' u asked if i could call your piece a poem.)
..I've been watching some anime about angels and such so hehe, this title really pulled me in. Yep, it's depressing.. i dunno tho, it's good in the sense that it's vivid and descriptive (hats off to that) but i never coudl agree with the idea of actually admitting that the one in pain is "me". I'd go on explaining this forever, yea, but then it'd be less of a review and more of a random rant.
hehe, so bottom lin eis: well written. Loved the imagery.
2Sheila Ibre*heck, if i could define poetry, i could define LoVE. But really, even a rocket-scientist can't do it right. no justice to definition. (if you're wonderin gwhat i'm blabbering abt, it's coz' u asked if i could call your piece a poem.)
..I've been watching some anime about angels and such so hehe, this title really pulled me in. Yep, it's depressing.. i dunno tho, it's good in the sense that it's vivid and descriptive (hats off to that) but i never coudl agree with the idea of actually admitting that the one in pain is "me". I'd go on explaining this forever, yea, but then it'd be less of a review and more of a random rant.
hehe, so bottom lin eis: well written. Loved the imagery.
1/18/2006 c1 21Phantoms-fallen-angel
wow.. that was incredibly chilling yet beautiful. Nice use of metaphor and descriptive language. Lovely Maggie... that was awesome.. I believe you're an angel... but not a broken one =)Luv LyssP.S (does that make me sound like a hypocrit considering my name is "fallen angel" lol :P) Cheers
21Phantoms-fallen-angelwow.. that was incredibly chilling yet beautiful. Nice use of metaphor and descriptive language. Lovely Maggie... that was awesome.. I believe you're an angel... but not a broken one =)Luv LyssP.S (does that make me sound like a hypocrit considering my name is "fallen angel" lol :P) Cheers
1/17/2006 c1 2Among-the-Vampires
Sad. But good. I like it a lot i love how you wrote the ending to it. Awesome poem.
2Among-the-VampiresSad. But good. I like it a lot i love how you wrote the ending to it. Awesome poem.
1/3/2006 c1 12Simplycity
I love the ending, though it seemed a bit cliche. [Don`t worry, my friends and I have tried but you CANNOT pry me away from that word. x]
But yes, how... "happy."
12SimplycityI love the ending, though it seemed a bit cliche. [Don`t worry, my friends and I have tried but you CANNOT pry me away from that word. x]
But yes, how... "happy."
12/28/2005 c1 3Grimmand Honninscrave
hmm... yes, you are right not a particuarly happy poem. A fellow auzzie eh? Fantastic, well im acually english in origin but never mind that. I live here so i guess that counts.
Anyway, fantastic poem. Well written and all that jazz!
Cheers, Grimmand Honninscrave.
3Grimmand Honninscravehmm... yes, you are right not a particuarly happy poem. A fellow auzzie eh? Fantastic, well im acually english in origin but never mind that. I live here so i guess that counts.
Anyway, fantastic poem. Well written and all that jazz!
Cheers, Grimmand Honninscrave.
12/26/2005 c1 5Leighton Carrington
This is definetly a poem, just one that refuses rhymes! Indeed, the final line is a huge punch to the face. Alas, I lie here with a broken eye. It's unique, but likeable.
5Leighton CarringtonThis is definetly a poem, just one that refuses rhymes! Indeed, the final line is a huge punch to the face. Alas, I lie here with a broken eye. It's unique, but likeable.
12/24/2005 c1 19Pink Sparrow
oh, the poem is so pretty! The last line was so powerful it just held the whole poem wonderfully. I love the style and the way you've written it. Freeverse poems rock and you've done this one really well, especially if you don't usually write like this. I love this poem! Nice work!
19Pink Sparrowoh, the poem is so pretty! The last line was so powerful it just held the whole poem wonderfully. I love the style and the way you've written it. Freeverse poems rock and you've done this one really well, especially if you don't usually write like this. I love this poem! Nice work!