for Lose My Senses1/31/2006 c1 
21XionZeros
Good job. I agree it was a bit corny but aren't we all corny to some extent in our writing? Still, I thought it was a great poem as I can emphasize with your feelings every time I fall in love.
21XionZerosGood job. I agree it was a bit corny but aren't we all corny to some extent in our writing? Still, I thought it was a great poem as I can emphasize with your feelings every time I fall in love.
12/24/2005 c1 35Strangerwithnoface
I do believe I understand exactly the feelings you're portraying here. Mm, beautiful. It flows really well... and the words just make you feel the emotions, or maybe I'm already feeling them. Either way, it's beautiful and thanks for sharing. Take care.
35StrangerwithnofaceI do believe I understand exactly the feelings you're portraying here. Mm, beautiful. It flows really well... and the words just make you feel the emotions, or maybe I'm already feeling them. Either way, it's beautiful and thanks for sharing. Take care.