for My friend Ana11/12/2007 c1 
6Chalk
wow, that was original! i've never read anything like it!
the last line was the best!
good work!
6Chalkwow, that was original! i've never read anything like it!
the last line was the best!
good work!
2/8/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Simply beautiful and I like how you hide all the emotions behind words and make us figure it out. Smart. Anyways, this was really good. Well done.
11les petits bateauxSimply beautiful and I like how you hide all the emotions behind words and make us figure it out. Smart. Anyways, this was really good. Well done.
2/7/2006 c1 Meghan
I loved it... It was really sad and kinda scary, but it was really...(searches for words)... intimate (not in a touchy way...) kind of like looking inside someone's brain. I loved it either way!
I loved it... It was really sad and kinda scary, but it was really...(searches for words)... intimate (not in a touchy way...) kind of like looking inside someone's brain. I loved it either way!
1/20/2006 c1 2SSSSS
That's a little sad. I like that last line a lot. This is a pretty good poem. I'll have to look at your other works sometime. Please drop by my site sometime and look at some of my stuff, please.
Tschau,Sam
2SSSSSThat's a little sad. I like that last line a lot. This is a pretty good poem. I'll have to look at your other works sometime. Please drop by my site sometime and look at some of my stuff, please.
Tschau,Sam
1/19/2006 c1 22nyvashorte
Hi!I really liked this poem! It really puts into perspective what it feels like to have a friend try and change you.
22nyvashorteHi!I really liked this poem! It really puts into perspective what it feels like to have a friend try and change you.
12/27/2005 c1 NESSA
That's really good, Elphie. I LOVE IT.
That's really good, Elphie. I LOVE IT.
12/23/2005 c1 1Music Makes Me Lose Control
Amazing, what is the world coming to where people starve themselves to look good? It's just pure idiocy but everyone is doing it. Anyways, its a great poem and going in my faves list :)lylYWB
1Music Makes Me Lose ControlAmazing, what is the world coming to where people starve themselves to look good? It's just pure idiocy but everyone is doing it. Anyways, its a great poem and going in my faves list :)lylYWB
12/22/2005 c1 9I'm content with losing x3
Well done. Thats last line is very powerful. Really makes you stop and think how much anorexia really takes over peoples lives. I love this.
Lauren
9I'm content with losing x3Well done. Thats last line is very powerful. Really makes you stop and think how much anorexia really takes over peoples lives. I love this.
Lauren