for Sherbet3/14/2006 c1 love-is-hate
i rele like this especially the bit about the black and white movie
i rele like this especially the bit about the black and white movie
1/25/2006 c1 
57empathic life
I can definitely see why this one has so many reviews. It's incredible. I love your writing style. I've run out of compliments, for fear of repeating myself. Rest assured that I love this poem and you as an author and all your other work (that I've read). Amazing. I do believe "Brings back long linger-lost days of watching you" is my favourite line. Alliteration rocks.
57empathic lifeI can definitely see why this one has so many reviews. It's incredible. I love your writing style. I've run out of compliments, for fear of repeating myself. Rest assured that I love this poem and you as an author and all your other work (that I've read). Amazing. I do believe "Brings back long linger-lost days of watching you" is my favourite line. Alliteration rocks.
1/10/2006 c1 53AchtungBabyAchtung
Brings back long linger-lost days of watching you.
i love that line. i love this whole thing actually! its a metaphor iv not seen before. iz x
53AchtungBabyAchtungBrings back long linger-lost days of watching you.
i love that line. i love this whole thing actually! its a metaphor iv not seen before. iz x
1/1/2006 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
I like this. Simple, but the idea of a taste having a bit of control over you is powerful enough in itself.
Keep writing.
58White Tea and GingerI like this. Simple, but the idea of a taste having a bit of control over you is powerful enough in itself.
Keep writing.
12/29/2005 c1 70elvenstorm
You should be sure bout this it's great! Love your choice of words and how you bring the sherbet and your story toegether, keep it up.
70elvenstormYou should be sure bout this it's great! Love your choice of words and how you bring the sherbet and your story toegether, keep it up.
12/24/2005 c1 17fontanellemonster
cool, the imnagery was great. especially the first few lines. nice.
17fontanellemonstercool, the imnagery was great. especially the first few lines. nice.
12/23/2005 c1 23La Gitane
You visited the sweet shop today, didn't you? :p
Joking aside, you've got good descriptions here - especially the first couple of lines. They manage to be as smoothly acidic as sherbet.
Nicely done.
23La GitaneYou visited the sweet shop today, didn't you? :p
Joking aside, you've got good descriptions here - especially the first couple of lines. They manage to be as smoothly acidic as sherbet.
Nicely done.