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2/9/2006 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
People only see their own pain.

Alan.
2/3/2006 c1 19Pink Sparrow
Wow, this is really good. I love the way its written. nice work!
1/28/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
Ha ha...I liked this one a LOT because it is totally what goes on today! (and nobody seems to see it! lol) "Are the ones that will spread their dark or golden wings?

And fly away over the land and sea to greater things unknown to them."I liked this part a lot! partly because it is really strong to the poem!
1/10/2006 c1 49Neaera
I love it. And I love the fact that it's written in pros, it proves my point to people that the poem doesn't have to ryhme to be absolutely fantastic! I love the message your getting out here. Great job. KEEP IT UP HUNS!
1/1/2006 c1 deletemyaccount2012
Sad, pretty, and well written.
12/29/2005 c1 24The FiboNACHI Sequence
Hey..

thanks for the review, every bit counts.

umm... i like this, as a piece of literature. it's informing of an opinion.

but...

i'm not sure i agree with the topic. life can seem really shitty sometimes..

much respect and keep it up.

nach
12/24/2005 c1 17sunday night sky
this is nice :D a good message. the last line doesnt make much sense (to me anyway) but other than that its great!
12/24/2005 c1 3Verdi
Good message, although somewhat hard to understand, but maybe that's the point.

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