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2/16/2012 c5 Michan
In myprevious review i forgot ti tell you how awesome our writing is, honestly you are one of the best authors ive read on fictionpress. I love it all!
2/16/2012 c4 Michan
Sorry i dont have an account yet , id just like to say,



DONT MAKE REINA END WITH TRAVIS! I love trent hes so cute! I have read this story before so i know she ends with trent

But please please snt make her end with travis, of course its up to ou. But waaaaaa theyre too cute;)

Im just onna oray you dont end it with travis in the sequel

-pray pray pray pray-
2/12/2012 c32 andieanne
AWWWW. I LOVE THE STORY! AS in. I swear, this is one of the stories that has the best kissing scenes. And Trent, he's so cuuuuute. :D Travis, hoooot boy. :" I'm looking forward to your sequel! :D
2/12/2012 c29 andieanne
AWWWW. FINALLY! Though I'm sort of in Travis' side. I still find Trent and Raina soooo cute! :" I like the whole make up part too! Keep it up! :D
2/11/2012 c37 midnight tales
Oh yes, I do think rewriting the sequel would be a better choice and I can't wait for you to start on it. Despite having finished reading this story years ago, I sometimes still find myself wondering what would happen in the end if you were to continue the sequel. Now that you're finally back on writing it again, I'm so excited!
2/11/2012 c37 ED
How about a sequel so u canend it the way u want to.
2/11/2012 c36 Mary4Angelus
I remember this story, reading along as you posted.

And I would love an alternative ending!

Write it and I'll keep an eye for it. :)
2/10/2012 c2 ray-ray
i've only read to chapter 2 but i love this story. its wierd my name is Raina and i have a step dad because my mom remarried after my dad died when i was 6 of cancer weird isnt it?
2/10/2012 c36 2tifferz92413
Even though I love the story how it is, I would love to read and alternate ending.
2/10/2012 c36 2akaCHEEKS
Hm, seeing as I'm a new reader-perhaps an old one, since I can't remember if I read through the end of this story or not-it doesn't matter to me either way. I would love to be able to read an alternate ending. It's crazy how much time has passed when you think about it. You wrote this 4 years ago!
2/10/2012 c36 topaz-dreamer
I love this story! And as much as I would love to see what happens now or what could have happened, I think it should be left alone. I think at this point somewhere in story-verse, they both have moved on and to go back and change that might disrupt their lives. And sometimes an alternate ending might change the story, it might mess it up a little, kind of disrupt the flow of the story.
2/9/2012 c36 Great Story
I liked the ending the way it was but an alternate one would be interesting also. If you really want to write more on this story why not finish the sequel? :)
2/9/2012 c36 3Kabryn
Well, I don't remember if I actually used to review your story or not way back when, and I honestly don't feel like flipping through pages of reviews to check... But anyway, I would be at least intrigued by an alternate ending. Even though I don't think it'd turn out the way I like since I always liked her with Travis rather than Trent, and I don't think that'll be happening.

I'd still probably read it though. In all honesty, I probably wouldn't even have time to review it, given my major in college being time consuming, but I'd read it. Even if I had to wait a few weeks to find the proper free time. I was always a fan of your story~
2/9/2012 c36 2d12e8k6
An alternative ending would be cool. I like the story just the way it is, but I'm curious about how this story could end differently. But either way, the story is AWESOME!
2/9/2012 c36 MonkeyStar
I would love it if you would continue the sequel or incorporated the sequel into the alternate story you want to write.
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