for Right Here In My Arms FINISHED2/16/2012 c5 Michan
In myprevious review i forgot ti tell you how awesome our writing is, honestly you are one of the best authors ive read on fictionpress. I love it all!
In myprevious review i forgot ti tell you how awesome our writing is, honestly you are one of the best authors ive read on fictionpress. I love it all!
2/16/2012 c4 Michan
Sorry i dont have an account yet , id just like to say,
PLEASE
IN THE SEQUEL
DONT MAKE REINA END WITH TRAVIS! I love trent hes so cute! I have read this story before so i know she ends with trent
But please please snt make her end with travis, of course its up to ou. But waaaaaa theyre too cute;)
Im just onna oray you dont end it with travis in the sequel
-pray pray pray pray-
Sorry i dont have an account yet , id just like to say,
PLEASE
IN THE SEQUEL
DONT MAKE REINA END WITH TRAVIS! I love trent hes so cute! I have read this story before so i know she ends with trent
But please please snt make her end with travis, of course its up to ou. But waaaaaa theyre too cute;)
Im just onna oray you dont end it with travis in the sequel
-pray pray pray pray-
2/12/2012 c32 andieanne
AWWWW. I LOVE THE STORY! AS in. I swear, this is one of the stories that has the best kissing scenes. And Trent, he's so cuuuuute. :D Travis, hoooot boy. :" I'm looking forward to your sequel! :D
AWWWW. I LOVE THE STORY! AS in. I swear, this is one of the stories that has the best kissing scenes. And Trent, he's so cuuuuute. :D Travis, hoooot boy. :" I'm looking forward to your sequel! :D
2/12/2012 c29 andieanne
AWWWW. FINALLY! Though I'm sort of in Travis' side. I still find Trent and Raina soooo cute! :" I like the whole make up part too! Keep it up! :D
AWWWW. FINALLY! Though I'm sort of in Travis' side. I still find Trent and Raina soooo cute! :" I like the whole make up part too! Keep it up! :D
2/11/2012 c37 midnight tales
Oh yes, I do think rewriting the sequel would be a better choice and I can't wait for you to start on it. Despite having finished reading this story years ago, I sometimes still find myself wondering what would happen in the end if you were to continue the sequel. Now that you're finally back on writing it again, I'm so excited!
Oh yes, I do think rewriting the sequel would be a better choice and I can't wait for you to start on it. Despite having finished reading this story years ago, I sometimes still find myself wondering what would happen in the end if you were to continue the sequel. Now that you're finally back on writing it again, I'm so excited!
2/11/2012 c37 ED
How about a sequel so u canend it the way u want to.
How about a sequel so u canend it the way u want to.
2/11/2012 c36 Mary4Angelus
I remember this story, reading along as you posted.
And I would love an alternative ending!
Write it and I'll keep an eye for it. :)
I remember this story, reading along as you posted.
And I would love an alternative ending!
Write it and I'll keep an eye for it. :)
2/10/2012 c2 ray-ray
i've only read to chapter 2 but i love this story. its wierd my name is Raina and i have a step dad because my mom remarried after my dad died when i was 6 of cancer weird isnt it?
i've only read to chapter 2 but i love this story. its wierd my name is Raina and i have a step dad because my mom remarried after my dad died when i was 6 of cancer weird isnt it?
2/10/2012 c36 
2tifferz92413
Even though I love the story how it is, I would love to read and alternate ending.
2tifferz92413Even though I love the story how it is, I would love to read and alternate ending.
2/10/2012 c36 2akaCHEEKS
Hm, seeing as I'm a new reader-perhaps an old one, since I can't remember if I read through the end of this story or not-it doesn't matter to me either way. I would love to be able to read an alternate ending. It's crazy how much time has passed when you think about it. You wrote this 4 years ago!
2akaCHEEKSHm, seeing as I'm a new reader-perhaps an old one, since I can't remember if I read through the end of this story or not-it doesn't matter to me either way. I would love to be able to read an alternate ending. It's crazy how much time has passed when you think about it. You wrote this 4 years ago!
2/10/2012 c36 topaz-dreamer
I love this story! And as much as I would love to see what happens now or what could have happened, I think it should be left alone. I think at this point somewhere in story-verse, they both have moved on and to go back and change that might disrupt their lives. And sometimes an alternate ending might change the story, it might mess it up a little, kind of disrupt the flow of the story.
I love this story! And as much as I would love to see what happens now or what could have happened, I think it should be left alone. I think at this point somewhere in story-verse, they both have moved on and to go back and change that might disrupt their lives. And sometimes an alternate ending might change the story, it might mess it up a little, kind of disrupt the flow of the story.
2/9/2012 c36 Great Story
I liked the ending the way it was but an alternate one would be interesting also. If you really want to write more on this story why not finish the sequel? :)
I liked the ending the way it was but an alternate one would be interesting also. If you really want to write more on this story why not finish the sequel? :)
2/9/2012 c36 3Kabryn
Well, I don't remember if I actually used to review your story or not way back when, and I honestly don't feel like flipping through pages of reviews to check... But anyway, I would be at least intrigued by an alternate ending. Even though I don't think it'd turn out the way I like since I always liked her with Travis rather than Trent, and I don't think that'll be happening.
I'd still probably read it though. In all honesty, I probably wouldn't even have time to review it, given my major in college being time consuming, but I'd read it. Even if I had to wait a few weeks to find the proper free time. I was always a fan of your story~
3KabrynWell, I don't remember if I actually used to review your story or not way back when, and I honestly don't feel like flipping through pages of reviews to check... But anyway, I would be at least intrigued by an alternate ending. Even though I don't think it'd turn out the way I like since I always liked her with Travis rather than Trent, and I don't think that'll be happening.
I'd still probably read it though. In all honesty, I probably wouldn't even have time to review it, given my major in college being time consuming, but I'd read it. Even if I had to wait a few weeks to find the proper free time. I was always a fan of your story~
2/9/2012 c36 2d12e8k6
An alternative ending would be cool. I like the story just the way it is, but I'm curious about how this story could end differently. But either way, the story is AWESOME!
2d12e8k6An alternative ending would be cool. I like the story just the way it is, but I'm curious about how this story could end differently. But either way, the story is AWESOME!
2/9/2012 c36 MonkeyStar
I would love it if you would continue the sequel or incorporated the sequel into the alternate story you want to write.
I would love it if you would continue the sequel or incorporated the sequel into the alternate story you want to write.