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for snowfalls:: unsung

12/26/2005 c1 4Arisu Morin
beautiful. to me it almost seems...abstract? (for lack of a better term at least) the use of bold and & and the likes simply added to your poem in an almost inexplicable way. the first paragraph caught me. awesome stuff.

~arisu
12/26/2005 c1 94smile persephone
'olympian snow' floored me. It was one of the most beautiful phrases I've seen in a long time. I love the title as well; it really caught my eye. The style is impeccable, lovely. Especially 'a princess/-y future melts'. The imagery is also quite powerful, the images that come to mind seem to appear strategically as if that was your intent when you were writing it.
12/26/2005 c1 17fontanellemonster
lovely imagery and a sweet concept.
12/26/2005 c1 10just a teardrop
i love this. gorgeous work, great imagery.

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