for me, myself and you2/7/2010 c1 
24fairies and snapple
I don't even know what to say. This is just incredible and beautiful and I love it.
24fairies and snappleI don't even know what to say. This is just incredible and beautiful and I love it.
4/12/2007 c1 9betalight
Ah, I really like this poem. It's very powerful. I like how you separated and silly me from the rest. A deep sentiment I feel most people share at some level or another.
9betalightAh, I really like this poem. It's very powerful. I like how you separated and silly me from the rest. A deep sentiment I feel most people share at some level or another.
3/20/2006 c1 95beti213
"if I had you I could learn to have myself, too." wow. where do you get this stuff? this piece is perfect from beginning to end. I adore it :)
95beti213"if I had you I could learn to have myself, too." wow. where do you get this stuff? this piece is perfect from beginning to end. I adore it :)
3/2/2006 c1 64not sure yet
so pretty and human, there's a lot of strength to your writing in this one, i muchly enjoyed this, excellent job
64not sure yetso pretty and human, there's a lot of strength to your writing in this one, i muchly enjoyed this, excellent job
2/20/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
jesus christ. favourites. i'm not even going to bother to explain why. YOU ARE SUCH A GENIUS IT HURTS
jesus christ. favourites. i'm not even going to bother to explain why. YOU ARE SUCH A GENIUS IT HURTS
2/18/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Wow, that is just incredibly heartbreaking. Gorgeous, though. And in a simple way. You don't say a lot, but the feeling comes through very clearly. Great job! Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesWow, that is just incredibly heartbreaking. Gorgeous, though. And in a simple way. You don't say a lot, but the feeling comes through very clearly. Great job! Keep writing! :)
2/16/2006 c1 delete account asap
It's wonderfull, really heartfelt, I can jsut imagine that I'm her lying on the floor. Great!
It's wonderfull, really heartfelt, I can jsut imagine that I'm her lying on the floor. Great!
1/24/2006 c1 13lipgloss-and-blacktears
Wow! This is great. I love the imagery throught the poem (especially the first stanza). I love the theme and the emotions brought up, I know them all too well. Well done!
13lipgloss-and-blacktearsWow! This is great. I love the imagery throught the poem (especially the first stanza). I love the theme and the emotions brought up, I know them all too well. Well done!
1/19/2006 c1 78acrobia
Wow...the way you use images in this poem is amaizing - the brick wall, the way you describe the goosebumps is really invoking, as well as the other decriptions that you give the character's body - the "secret slices of my eyelids" for example, it's a wonderful descriptions. I also really liked the way you keep using the word "me" or "my", as if the character is trying to vindicate herself but can't - its a strong piece, made stronger by the hidden images and tone. Keep up the good work!xo - Acrobia
78acrobiaWow...the way you use images in this poem is amaizing - the brick wall, the way you describe the goosebumps is really invoking, as well as the other decriptions that you give the character's body - the "secret slices of my eyelids" for example, it's a wonderful descriptions. I also really liked the way you keep using the word "me" or "my", as if the character is trying to vindicate herself but can't - its a strong piece, made stronger by the hidden images and tone. Keep up the good work!xo - Acrobia