for Jump2/28/2006 c1 
123Black and White Dreams
i really liked this poem! i know how it feels to want to jump but then remember something good and change your mind. i can relate and i feel strong emotion in this. good job! keep writing! choa! love, Caitlin
123Black and White Dreamsi really liked this poem! i know how it feels to want to jump but then remember something good and change your mind. i can relate and i feel strong emotion in this. good job! keep writing! choa! love, Caitlin
12/27/2005 c1 mysterious-footprints
I think this is pretty good. I love the line, "The brink of inanity". It sounds really cool.
I think this is pretty good. I love the line, "The brink of inanity". It sounds really cool.