for I Am A Moment1/11/2006 c1 
96Briar's Thorn
beautiful, very well done. just a question... the line were it says 'i am your future, your day and your right' is that suppose to say right or night? besides that, i love it you are a master at this...Big Hug for the good work!
96Briar's Thornbeautiful, very well done. just a question... the line were it says 'i am your future, your day and your right' is that suppose to say right or night? besides that, i love it you are a master at this...Big Hug for the good work!
12/27/2005 c1 80AbstractMind
I love this. I think it is absolutely beautiful. However, there is a mess-up towards the end-"I am your future, your day and your nightI am your nightmare, your fear and your night"
(take out that 2nd night)great work
80AbstractMindI love this. I think it is absolutely beautiful. However, there is a mess-up towards the end-"I am your future, your day and your nightI am your nightmare, your fear and your night"
(take out that 2nd night)great work