for Simply, For You1/11/2006 c1 
96Briar's Thorn
wow you made me leak(cry).i don't know what to say...you are too good at this(as so many hurtful memories flash through my mind)... its incredible very, very well done.
96Briar's Thornwow you made me leak(cry).i don't know what to say...you are too good at this(as so many hurtful memories flash through my mind)... its incredible very, very well done.
1/11/2006 c1 7Elphie Thropp
The rhyming is a little forced, but rhyming in poems is quite hard (that's why I don't do it hehe).I do like the poem itself. The "For if we keep up this awkward charade Our only bed shall be our grave" is especially fantastic. Keep it up!
7Elphie ThroppThe rhyming is a little forced, but rhyming in poems is quite hard (that's why I don't do it hehe).I do like the poem itself. The "For if we keep up this awkward charade Our only bed shall be our grave" is especially fantastic. Keep it up!