for Flufforama10/3/2009 c9 
6Bleucrystale05
The stories are adorable..XD i like love letters, dancing in the rain, ramen love and love thy neighbor(it ressembles my friend's love life.. ALOT.. =o )
You sure like writing romance huh? i hope i could write like you. i'm new at writing romance..XD
neway, keep it coming! :]
6Bleucrystale05The stories are adorable..XD i like love letters, dancing in the rain, ramen love and love thy neighbor(it ressembles my friend's love life.. ALOT.. =o )
You sure like writing romance huh? i hope i could write like you. i'm new at writing romance..XD
neway, keep it coming! :]
4/20/2007 c9 14FreakierThanThou
Aww. Those were great. I liked Ramen Noodles, Silly Chicken, and Dancing in the Rain best. I live in a very rainy area, and I can see that happening to just all my friends. :) We're a weird little group.
Anyway, this was really cute.
Keep writing,
-Freaky
14FreakierThanThouAww. Those were great. I liked Ramen Noodles, Silly Chicken, and Dancing in the Rain best. I live in a very rainy area, and I can see that happening to just all my friends. :) We're a weird little group.
Anyway, this was really cute.
Keep writing,
-Freaky
7/30/2006 c9 28woodstock1969
Aw, all the little fluffies are so cute! Haha, sorry, I'm an incurable romantic and I love fluff!
28woodstock1969Aw, all the little fluffies are so cute! Haha, sorry, I'm an incurable romantic and I love fluff!
3/3/2006 c2 newby6320
love this story. it is really beautiful. please let me know when you write more.
love this story. it is really beautiful. please let me know when you write more.
3/3/2006 c3 newby6320
Your style and voice are totally present in this story. I really like it. this is compleatly something you would write. p.s. Nicole likes it too.
Your style and voice are totally present in this story. I really like it. this is compleatly something you would write. p.s. Nicole likes it too.
3/3/2006 c4 newby6320
interesting and cute, you should write a zequal about when Suki gets to go to cullinary school
interesting and cute, you should write a zequal about when Suki gets to go to cullinary school
3/3/2006 c8 newby6320
In the paragraph: She ran back to the kitchen and grinned shakily at Calin...you say She grabbed her hand and pulled her to the door. um. did you meen to say that?
In the paragraph: She ran back to the kitchen and grinned shakily at Calin...you say She grabbed her hand and pulled her to the door. um. did you meen to say that?
2/10/2006 c1 33Nicole.A
I like this one. Can't wait to read the actual story. Thanks for reviewing "Incomplete", and bringing a missing word to my attention. Keep up the great writing and don't forget to have fun with it.
~**Nicole**~
33Nicole.AI like this one. Can't wait to read the actual story. Thanks for reviewing "Incomplete", and bringing a missing word to my attention. Keep up the great writing and don't forget to have fun with it.
~**Nicole**~
1/10/2006 c2 27MC Romance
*Crying* Oh so fluffdelic! So adorable! I'm hopeless romantic like Toby so I'm just dying!Muchas Gracias for the R&R!-MC
27MC Romance*Crying* Oh so fluffdelic! So adorable! I'm hopeless romantic like Toby so I'm just dying!Muchas Gracias for the R&R!-MC
1/4/2006 c9 4Mice 12
Meanie. Friendly, blonde, meanie. I can't believe you forced me to review this one. Gah. I'm not good with giving con. crit. for fluffy, sappy, mushy, romancey stuff. Okay, but...whoa. That was totally you one year ago. Obsessive tall nice freak. In my opinion, I don't like how you said you (I mean, the character) loved him. It was...a bit...bland. "I've never had this feeling before either." Go into a bit more detail about the feeling (Hell, what do I know. I don't love.) without knowing the feeling of what you're (the character) exactly 'feeling', it's a bit odd. I, for example, probably never have felt that feeling before. Okay, so all in all, this is probably my least favorite one. It's not that it's badly written or anything, I just don't like fluffs. Especially ones I'm being forced to review.~ArisuPS Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose fans, DON'T HURT ME. *cowers*
4Mice 12Meanie. Friendly, blonde, meanie. I can't believe you forced me to review this one. Gah. I'm not good with giving con. crit. for fluffy, sappy, mushy, romancey stuff. Okay, but...whoa. That was totally you one year ago. Obsessive tall nice freak. In my opinion, I don't like how you said you (I mean, the character) loved him. It was...a bit...bland. "I've never had this feeling before either." Go into a bit more detail about the feeling (Hell, what do I know. I don't love.) without knowing the feeling of what you're (the character) exactly 'feeling', it's a bit odd. I, for example, probably never have felt that feeling before. Okay, so all in all, this is probably my least favorite one. It's not that it's badly written or anything, I just don't like fluffs. Especially ones I'm being forced to review.~ArisuPS Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose fans, DON'T HURT ME. *cowers*