for Flufforama1/2/2006 c1 newby6320
Cute story. You should build off of it. There are a lot of questions let to answer so it wouldn't be hard. For example: when/why were books her only friends? and what happened to change that? was it a terrible event in her life? did she get trapped in a book? or did the book come to life? What about Neal ? how long has he liked Lila? when did he realize that he did? how did they meet? You should really write more on it.
Cute story. You should build off of it. There are a lot of questions let to answer so it wouldn't be hard. For example: when/why were books her only friends? and what happened to change that? was it a terrible event in her life? did she get trapped in a book? or did the book come to life? What about Neal ? how long has he liked Lila? when did he realize that he did? how did they meet? You should really write more on it.
1/1/2006 c5 
7yarrowicefrost
I really liked this installment:) Dunno what to think of chapter 6...it's a bit off for me. good job anyways and thanks for reviewing back:)
7yarrowicefrostI really liked this installment:) Dunno what to think of chapter 6...it's a bit off for me. good job anyways and thanks for reviewing back:)
12/31/2005 c7 liz
yay! fluff! that last one wasn't so slashy tho. oh well... do one about neighbors! neighbor stories are lovely and nice. as i always say "love thy neighbor as thyself" hehe... long and fluffy.
yay! fluff! that last one wasn't so slashy tho. oh well... do one about neighbors! neighbor stories are lovely and nice. as i always say "love thy neighbor as thyself" hehe... long and fluffy.
12/31/2005 c6 4Mice 12
Holy fuck. I said I wouldn't read this one, because you said there was something about Mary Sues and shit. It might be because I'm watching the part in Naruto where Sasuke sacrifices himself or something like that, but I like this chapter. (OMFG...What the hell is happening to me? I BLAME YOU! *chants mantra* Must hate fluff. Must hate fluff. Must hate...) Is her name Mary Sue? Her actual name? It's well written, I like chapter 6's style and it's a cute drabble.Arisu
4Mice 12Holy fuck. I said I wouldn't read this one, because you said there was something about Mary Sues and shit. It might be because I'm watching the part in Naruto where Sasuke sacrifices himself or something like that, but I like this chapter. (OMFG...What the hell is happening to me? I BLAME YOU! *chants mantra* Must hate fluff. Must hate fluff. Must hate...) Is her name Mary Sue? Her actual name? It's well written, I like chapter 6's style and it's a cute drabble.Arisu
12/31/2005 c3 V
This is good. I like this (I liked chapter 6 too). Even though it's not as sweet as the others, it's still great in its own way.
This is good. I like this (I liked chapter 6 too). Even though it's not as sweet as the others, it's still great in its own way.
12/31/2005 c6 V
Wow, this one was...well, it wasn't quite as sweet as the other ones but I'm glad because variety is the spice of life, you know? Anyway, I liked it. Too much sweet would be bad, so having chapters like this is good.
Wow, this one was...well, it wasn't quite as sweet as the other ones but I'm glad because variety is the spice of life, you know? Anyway, I liked it. Too much sweet would be bad, so having chapters like this is good.
12/31/2005 c5 V
Wow, you're right! This one is pretty... Hmm, a boy with blue hair? Seems like if she'd met him she'd know him right away, which is why it makes it better that they've never met before... anyway it was sweet.
Wow, you're right! This one is pretty... Hmm, a boy with blue hair? Seems like if she'd met him she'd know him right away, which is why it makes it better that they've never met before... anyway it was sweet.
12/31/2005 c4 V
Oh my goodness I LOVE this one! It's so nice and cute and sweet! Aw! You write these so well... *big smile* this has made my day!
Oh my goodness I LOVE this one! It's so nice and cute and sweet! Aw! You write these so well... *big smile* this has made my day!