for Mascara4/30/2008 c23 strawberry buttercup
i love that little bit with the plankton at the end. cute, it was all cute. loved it. thanks for a great read.
i love that little bit with the plankton at the end. cute, it was all cute. loved it. thanks for a great read.
4/26/2008 c23 jaeye
Nice story :) I like Peter, even though he makes my head spin. I don't get it about the carpet girl though. And is John and Carol the same John and Carol he knew back in high school? Whoa, if its is. I like how Peter had such a sucky childhood and it made his view of everything so skewed. I think you did that really well. Thanks for the story~!
Nice story :) I like Peter, even though he makes my head spin. I don't get it about the carpet girl though. And is John and Carol the same John and Carol he knew back in high school? Whoa, if its is. I like how Peter had such a sucky childhood and it made his view of everything so skewed. I think you did that really well. Thanks for the story~!
3/1/2008 c17 H.A.G. Approved
ok no more Italian dressing for me. Also never rub Bert's bees in your eyes it stings and feels oddly minty. i did it on purpose once and ran around screaming "My eyes are minty fresh!"
ok no more Italian dressing for me. Also never rub Bert's bees in your eyes it stings and feels oddly minty. i did it on purpose once and ran around screaming "My eyes are minty fresh!"
2/18/2008 c23 Lile Arresty
lol All your female names started with C: Carlota, Cassandra, Christine, Clarissa, Chloe, Cindy. But I liked your story even if the end was a bit suddenly.
lol All your female names started with C: Carlota, Cassandra, Christine, Clarissa, Chloe, Cindy. But I liked your story even if the end was a bit suddenly.
2/7/2008 c23 True.Randomness
Interestin, sarcastic, cynical, and one of the funniest series I have read in a while. This trully was a lighthearted story, which is a great escape from all the agnst stories there are now a days. I loved the conclusion and they way the story was writen in an informal way. Can't wait to read your other story...
Interestin, sarcastic, cynical, and one of the funniest series I have read in a while. This trully was a lighthearted story, which is a great escape from all the agnst stories there are now a days. I loved the conclusion and they way the story was writen in an informal way. Can't wait to read your other story...
2/4/2008 c23 Skyfallouch
Many symbolic meanings and irony. I enjoyed the story thoughout the whole time and once again, I love your writing style! :D
I look foward in reading your other stories!
Many symbolic meanings and irony. I enjoyed the story thoughout the whole time and once again, I love your writing style! :D
I look foward in reading your other stories!
2/3/2008 c6 
2SkyFallOuch
I just started reading this story and I'm really liking it.
I'm also noticing that all the girls' names start with a C.
Love your writing style! :D
2SkyFallOuchI just started reading this story and I'm really liking it.
I'm also noticing that all the girls' names start with a C.
Love your writing style! :D
1/19/2008 c2 4Lexy-Kun
I just had to say : I fucking LOVE this ! It's been a while since the last time I reviewed a story, even the really good ones, but yours manages to be sarcastic and sweet at the same time... I don't know how you do it, but you do. Well, that's just the first two chapters, so I've just got to hope that the rest is as good as the beginning, but... I already know it's a happy ending (I don't read stories with bad endings, they depress the hell out of me and I think life's already doing a really good job at that) and that's Peter will end up with Andy... Now I've just got to hope that this mysterious, sexy, flirtatious (love the word, even if it's apparently old-fashioned) cute black-haired gothic-biker-ish is Andy, 'cause I already love him.
I love how this is all about sex and blablabla, but poor Peter just can't keep from being all amazed by his looks and is even obsessed by his necklace. And how the "stranger" couldn't resist getting out of his way to find him. If it was only because he was a "good fuck", he would just give up if he wasn't there and find another good fuck, wouldn't he ? I mean, isn't it what one-night standers do? (well, of course, I'm not a specialist but still...)
Anyway, I'm off to read more, and I might not review this again, or not before a really really long time (like, months or something). So, just so you know : your characters are believable, they have a real "voice" (like my creative writing teacher used to say), from what I've seen there's no "guys" that actually act, react and think like girls (which annoys me a lot in yaoi stories), I haven't seen any typos (which is, in fact, quite rare), and I love the mix between sarcasm, humour and sweetness. You convey emotions, you make it seem real, from what I've read so far, you're a great author.
4Lexy-KunI just had to say : I fucking LOVE this ! It's been a while since the last time I reviewed a story, even the really good ones, but yours manages to be sarcastic and sweet at the same time... I don't know how you do it, but you do. Well, that's just the first two chapters, so I've just got to hope that the rest is as good as the beginning, but... I already know it's a happy ending (I don't read stories with bad endings, they depress the hell out of me and I think life's already doing a really good job at that) and that's Peter will end up with Andy... Now I've just got to hope that this mysterious, sexy, flirtatious (love the word, even if it's apparently old-fashioned) cute black-haired gothic-biker-ish is Andy, 'cause I already love him.
I love how this is all about sex and blablabla, but poor Peter just can't keep from being all amazed by his looks and is even obsessed by his necklace. And how the "stranger" couldn't resist getting out of his way to find him. If it was only because he was a "good fuck", he would just give up if he wasn't there and find another good fuck, wouldn't he ? I mean, isn't it what one-night standers do? (well, of course, I'm not a specialist but still...)
Anyway, I'm off to read more, and I might not review this again, or not before a really really long time (like, months or something). So, just so you know : your characters are believable, they have a real "voice" (like my creative writing teacher used to say), from what I've seen there's no "guys" that actually act, react and think like girls (which annoys me a lot in yaoi stories), I haven't seen any typos (which is, in fact, quite rare), and I love the mix between sarcasm, humour and sweetness. You convey emotions, you make it seem real, from what I've read so far, you're a great author.
1/8/2008 c23 Hansee
That is the cutest ending ever, love it. :)
That is the cutest ending ever, love it. :)
1/8/2008 c14 Hansee
No, not angst. *bites nails*
Hehe, I'll just stick my head in the sand and refuse to believe that Andy + Peters future isn't in like the stars. Tom + Sam are weirdos,( although, admittedly neither of them have jumped out of a car).
No, not angst. *bites nails*
Hehe, I'll just stick my head in the sand and refuse to believe that Andy + Peters future isn't in like the stars. Tom + Sam are weirdos,( although, admittedly neither of them have jumped out of a car).