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52Liviania
Great story - the chapter titles rock. I love that both Peter and Andy are such a-holes, but still likeable. And Peter's protestation at the end against having sex on granite rocks. (Though I'm afraid I don't get the Harry/rugseller thing. Perhaps Peter has a thing for teenagers?)
Livi
52LivianiaGreat story - the chapter titles rock. I love that both Peter and Andy are such a-holes, but still likeable. And Peter's protestation at the end against having sex on granite rocks. (Though I'm afraid I don't get the Harry/rugseller thing. Perhaps Peter has a thing for teenagers?)
Livi
5/10/2007 c23 8mesmerised bookcat
O.K... long time reader, first time reviewer (sorry). Anyway, first up I just have to say that I really like the chapter headings V. funny(!) in a confusing kind of way. But I also really like the story (well duh, if not I wouldn't be reading it let alone reviewing it) especially the main, even if he is totally clueless but that's part of what makes him so fun to read. Well, that's about all I can articulate except please, please get writing!
~mesmerised
8mesmerised bookcatO.K... long time reader, first time reviewer (sorry). Anyway, first up I just have to say that I really like the chapter headings V. funny(!) in a confusing kind of way. But I also really like the story (well duh, if not I wouldn't be reading it let alone reviewing it) especially the main, even if he is totally clueless but that's part of what makes him so fun to read. Well, that's about all I can articulate except please, please get writing!
~mesmerised
3/12/2007 c23 ks darkstorm
I love the way this was written. You are amazing!
Im so adding it to my favourites, it was awesome.
Much love.
I love the way this was written. You are amazing!
Im so adding it to my favourites, it was awesome.
Much love.
3/9/2007 c23 1Zoius and the Devil
very, very sweet fic.
seriously, it was complete, the writing was good, and it was nice and slow-paced-there's nothing i like more than a slow-paced complete fic. i loved Andy's character, as well as Peter's. i never really liked the name Peter before, but now i do.
anyways, this fic was totally and completely awesome. i really, really liked it, even though i thought that the end didn't quite solve the Same problem. (it was still sweet, though. i liked Peter's confession.)
-kon
1Zoius and the Devilvery, very sweet fic.
seriously, it was complete, the writing was good, and it was nice and slow-paced-there's nothing i like more than a slow-paced complete fic. i loved Andy's character, as well as Peter's. i never really liked the name Peter before, but now i do.
anyways, this fic was totally and completely awesome. i really, really liked it, even though i thought that the end didn't quite solve the Same problem. (it was still sweet, though. i liked Peter's confession.)
-kon
3/4/2007 c23 36Laurena
okay you live in.. Arizona! I'm just guessing, because that's where I live, and I feel the pain.
This story has got to be one of the only real stories i've read on FP, I mean this could be published, no this should be published, the plot in immaculate, the theme is absolutely great, the characters...I love the characters! and its real, its not all lovey-dovey 'i love you, you love me lets go at it'
Ah! this story was great I don't know what to say, I'm rambling! and I don't even ramble!
anyways you deserve all the compliments you can get, 5 thumbs up!
36Laurenaokay you live in.. Arizona! I'm just guessing, because that's where I live, and I feel the pain.
This story has got to be one of the only real stories i've read on FP, I mean this could be published, no this should be published, the plot in immaculate, the theme is absolutely great, the characters...I love the characters! and its real, its not all lovey-dovey 'i love you, you love me lets go at it'
Ah! this story was great I don't know what to say, I'm rambling! and I don't even ramble!
anyways you deserve all the compliments you can get, 5 thumbs up!
3/3/2007 c23 deleteaccount128413
wow
i really liked it
i've never read any stories about a shark and plankton XD
but i really liked how this one turned out... it would be funny in the future when they speak of how they met XD
wow
i really liked it
i've never read any stories about a shark and plankton XD
but i really liked how this one turned out... it would be funny in the future when they speak of how they met XD
2/24/2007 c23 103Redrum
Still not sure about this hint. Does Peter find them attractive because they're innocent and that represents beauty to him? Or they're what he's not, so he's envious of that?
This was a very well done story. I would pay to see this story either redone, or a sequel done in Andy's point of view. I'd really love to see what he was thinking at the beginning when he first meets Peter.
103RedrumStill not sure about this hint. Does Peter find them attractive because they're innocent and that represents beauty to him? Or they're what he's not, so he's envious of that?
This was a very well done story. I would pay to see this story either redone, or a sequel done in Andy's point of view. I'd really love to see what he was thinking at the beginning when he first meets Peter.
2/24/2007 c22 Redrum
I really like Cassandra's character, which is something since I usually dislike side characters.
I think I'm finally getting this whole 'Mascara' title.
I really like Cassandra's character, which is something since I usually dislike side characters.
I think I'm finally getting this whole 'Mascara' title.
2/24/2007 c20 Redrum
Hmm... I wonder if Peter will tell Andrew about the dog. That has to be the most fucked up childhood memory I've ever heard. I wonder how he'd react to it. Then again, this type of conversation probably won't come up again.
Hmm... I wonder if Peter will tell Andrew about the dog. That has to be the most fucked up childhood memory I've ever heard. I wonder how he'd react to it. Then again, this type of conversation probably won't come up again.
2/24/2007 c19 Redrum
Aww. I know exactly how Peter feels. I feel so uncomfortable if someone hugs me. Especially when I don't know them that well. Talk about an invasion of my personal space. Yet at the same time I like being hugged tightly.
Aww. I know exactly how Peter feels. I feel so uncomfortable if someone hugs me. Especially when I don't know them that well. Talk about an invasion of my personal space. Yet at the same time I like being hugged tightly.
2/24/2007 c16 Redrum
Oh my God... that is the sickest thing I've *ever* heard of. God... no wonder Peter is so fucked up. What a way to traumatize a kid, making him sleep with his dead dog that he accidently killed! I kinda feel sick now because I'm picturing it and... ugh.
It's distrubing, and I'm afraid to know where you got this idea from, creative and sick as it is. I wish I could get the image out of my mind.
Oh my God... that is the sickest thing I've *ever* heard of. God... no wonder Peter is so fucked up. What a way to traumatize a kid, making him sleep with his dead dog that he accidently killed! I kinda feel sick now because I'm picturing it and... ugh.
It's distrubing, and I'm afraid to know where you got this idea from, creative and sick as it is. I wish I could get the image out of my mind.
2/22/2007 c12 Cassie
I just had to say something, Harry Potter is the antichrist? Lord Voldemort is God? And you a Satanist? Lol... i wonder where your mind went there. I am really enjoying this story, so much that I'm ignoring all my homework (but college sucks anyway, eh?). You're writing is very original. I'll have to see if you've written anything else. Though hopefully after homework.
I just had to say something, Harry Potter is the antichrist? Lord Voldemort is God? And you a Satanist? Lol... i wonder where your mind went there. I am really enjoying this story, so much that I'm ignoring all my homework (but college sucks anyway, eh?). You're writing is very original. I'll have to see if you've written anything else. Though hopefully after homework.
2/20/2007 c23 3Back of Beyond
hmm, i still dont understand the harry/rug seller part but oh well :P
holy crap, i love this story so much! i think i'm gonna cry now there's no more for me to read :'(
this is so going on my favourite stories list!
3Back of Beyondhmm, i still dont understand the harry/rug seller part but oh well :P
holy crap, i love this story so much! i think i'm gonna cry now there's no more for me to read :'(
this is so going on my favourite stories list!
1/17/2007 c8 Chrysler
The taco bell episode was to die for! All this over a taco, those guys are so immature. It was a nice breath of fresh air-that humour. Andy sticking up for him in that burst of spanish was ohh delicioso...I love foregin languages.I shoudl've caught onto that with his last name. The blast from the past was a bit sad too-I hate people completely abandon one family for another and stoop so low to bribery. But hell, who would pass of an offer like that? IF the man's an asshole, let him be a paying asshole all he wants...nothings cheap in life. Hahaha, glad they're cool again. Their so adorable together...in a demented way. Andy is such a sweetie.
The taco bell episode was to die for! All this over a taco, those guys are so immature. It was a nice breath of fresh air-that humour. Andy sticking up for him in that burst of spanish was ohh delicioso...I love foregin languages.I shoudl've caught onto that with his last name. The blast from the past was a bit sad too-I hate people completely abandon one family for another and stoop so low to bribery. But hell, who would pass of an offer like that? IF the man's an asshole, let him be a paying asshole all he wants...nothings cheap in life. Hahaha, glad they're cool again. Their so adorable together...in a demented way. Andy is such a sweetie.