5/19/2006 c21 ddz008
Great chapter! They relation is so complicated! :S And I want to clear things about Sam ¬¬ Keep writing, please! :)
Great chapter! They relation is so complicated! :S And I want to clear things about Sam ¬¬ Keep writing, please! :)
5/19/2006 c21 diebyownhands
I love the story but some how I think I've missed a lot of things when ever you mention hints or metaphors I just don't get them I really have to re read this before the next update.I feel dumb.
I love the story but some how I think I've missed a lot of things when ever you mention hints or metaphors I just don't get them I really have to re read this before the next update.I feel dumb.
5/19/2006 c20 ItalianQT
Good chapter! I'm glad that Peter is finally opening up to Andy! They've both had a pretty sad past :-( ... Update soon : )
Good chapter! I'm glad that Peter is finally opening up to Andy! They've both had a pretty sad past :-( ... Update soon : )
5/17/2006 c20 electraray
woah. read the fic 3 hours straight. my eyes! anyway. it is a really good read, if a little confusing and weird at first. i love the subtle(k, maybe not so) angst and denial on peter's part. um. so why's andy bad again? he seems such a sweetheart... =\
woah. read the fic 3 hours straight. my eyes! anyway. it is a really good read, if a little confusing and weird at first. i love the subtle(k, maybe not so) angst and denial on peter's part. um. so why's andy bad again? he seems such a sweetheart... =\
5/16/2006 c20 2Jayn
*Hugs* Bad stories make me sad. But I like knowing more about them. Please update!
*Hugs* Bad stories make me sad. But I like knowing more about them. Please update!
5/15/2006 c20 4wickedzl
This story is getting better. I'm going to read the whole thing again once its all completed.
This story is getting better. I'm going to read the whole thing again once its all completed.
5/14/2006 c20 8Smokey Betta
Finally, another deep discussion with Andy and Peter! It was good to finally know some of Andy's past, since we always get Peter's. I really wish Peter would've told Andy about Red, though. I can’t stand Peter’s thoughts being stuck up inside of him all the time. Because I have to suffer along with him, you know? lol. Another day he shall share, I suppose? Although I can't think of a time where you could set Andy and Peter up in a similar setting together without it being too close to the 'restaurant scene' where they share their secrets. But I can't wait for you to prove me wrong.
On Tony - For some reason, I like him. I don't know why. I just like the bad guys for some strange peculiarity, though I'm not too much of a Sam fan. I don't hate him like most readers do though, he’s just not my favorite like Andy and Peter and…well I guess I’m really only fans of the couple, huh? I thought it was somewhat of a start when Peter claimed that Sam was the person he hated most. It was some sort of a dent into the Andy and Sam relationship. I shall be looking forward to the day when it all comes crashing down, if it ever does. I’m afraid Andy might suffer too much from losing his relationship with Sam…I mean…look what he did when Peter tried to leave him!
Can't wait for the update! Peter has some issues to work out still, especially since he was checking Andy out one minute, and refusing to shower with him the next.
Finally, another deep discussion with Andy and Peter! It was good to finally know some of Andy's past, since we always get Peter's. I really wish Peter would've told Andy about Red, though. I can’t stand Peter’s thoughts being stuck up inside of him all the time. Because I have to suffer along with him, you know? lol. Another day he shall share, I suppose? Although I can't think of a time where you could set Andy and Peter up in a similar setting together without it being too close to the 'restaurant scene' where they share their secrets. But I can't wait for you to prove me wrong.
On Tony - For some reason, I like him. I don't know why. I just like the bad guys for some strange peculiarity, though I'm not too much of a Sam fan. I don't hate him like most readers do though, he’s just not my favorite like Andy and Peter and…well I guess I’m really only fans of the couple, huh? I thought it was somewhat of a start when Peter claimed that Sam was the person he hated most. It was some sort of a dent into the Andy and Sam relationship. I shall be looking forward to the day when it all comes crashing down, if it ever does. I’m afraid Andy might suffer too much from losing his relationship with Sam…I mean…look what he did when Peter tried to leave him!
Can't wait for the update! Peter has some issues to work out still, especially since he was checking Andy out one minute, and refusing to shower with him the next.
5/14/2006 c20 tinkle time kelly
Your chapters are becoming one of the highlights of my weekends.First and formost,it's because I love this story. Second because I can count on it being here. Also because I really love your character,the major ones(Peter,Andy),minor ones(Sam,Cassandra,Tony and the many others). I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Your chapters are becoming one of the highlights of my weekends.First and formost,it's because I love this story. Second because I can count on it being here. Also because I really love your character,the major ones(Peter,Andy),minor ones(Sam,Cassandra,Tony and the many others). I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
5/14/2006 c20 4mandrake-o
I don't think people should have to warn about interracial relationships. In fact, the first time I read that as a warning I thought it was the strangest thing, wondering who was so narrow-minded that they had to warn about that. I don't think I've ever read a story by someone who actually warned that.
This reminds me of this conversation I was eavesdropping on as I walked home from the bus stop. One of the guys who had caught the bus with me (had lots of problems, I tried to avoid having conversations with him... he mostly talked to me because he was in lust with my friend) was talking about which races were acceptable to date which other races. And all I was thinking was "But the kids turn out so gorgeous" from the relationships he was forbidding. I mean, seriously, so much hotness comes from mixed relationships.
As for slash, I don't think we should have to warn about that either. But honestly, if that's what I'm looking for, it makes it lots easier to find.
As for preaching to the choir, probably, but the choir aren't always so faithful as you may believe.
I'm glad you didn't forget to post this week. It's a good way to end my weekend. Oh, and as someone who spills milk very often, I sympathise with Peter.
=) Mandraco.
I don't think people should have to warn about interracial relationships. In fact, the first time I read that as a warning I thought it was the strangest thing, wondering who was so narrow-minded that they had to warn about that. I don't think I've ever read a story by someone who actually warned that.
This reminds me of this conversation I was eavesdropping on as I walked home from the bus stop. One of the guys who had caught the bus with me (had lots of problems, I tried to avoid having conversations with him... he mostly talked to me because he was in lust with my friend) was talking about which races were acceptable to date which other races. And all I was thinking was "But the kids turn out so gorgeous" from the relationships he was forbidding. I mean, seriously, so much hotness comes from mixed relationships.
As for slash, I don't think we should have to warn about that either. But honestly, if that's what I'm looking for, it makes it lots easier to find.
As for preaching to the choir, probably, but the choir aren't always so faithful as you may believe.
I'm glad you didn't forget to post this week. It's a good way to end my weekend. Oh, and as someone who spills milk very often, I sympathise with Peter.
=) Mandraco.
5/13/2006 c20 ddz008
Great chapteR!I like Andy a lot. But I still want to know more about Sam. Like you said in your first character, Peter is extremely prejudiced. It's nice to see that sometimes he makes an effort and behaves better.Hope you update soon! :D
Great chapteR!I like Andy a lot. But I still want to know more about Sam. Like you said in your first character, Peter is extremely prejudiced. It's nice to see that sometimes he makes an effort and behaves better.Hope you update soon! :D
5/13/2006 c20 1Safety Canary
I love the way you use your words - like "With a sigh, I slowly wean myself from the bed..." You paint a great picture with all of this. I was disappointed with the lack of Cassandra and her bitchy familial substitute Tony, but then I forgot about both of them in the scene at the Chinese restaurant - I think it's definitely one of my favorite parts of this entire story. Not only were Andy and Peter actually halfway decent to each other, but we got to see more of Nonrobot Peter and learn a lot more about his past as well as Andy's.
Sometimes I feel like your chapters are going nowhere - one of the things about these kinds of stories is that you have to add something for the reader to look forward to so they know where they're going. That's why I thought the trip to Mexico was a good idea plotwise. And finally I felt in this chapter we are actually getting somewhere, it's not just a lot of sexual frustration and cynicism. If there's any kind of criticism I have on this story, it's simply the overall negativity of everything - but I don't know, I suppose that adds to the charm...
This is the highlight of my weekend sadly. Can't wait for another update!
I love the way you use your words - like "With a sigh, I slowly wean myself from the bed..." You paint a great picture with all of this. I was disappointed with the lack of Cassandra and her bitchy familial substitute Tony, but then I forgot about both of them in the scene at the Chinese restaurant - I think it's definitely one of my favorite parts of this entire story. Not only were Andy and Peter actually halfway decent to each other, but we got to see more of Nonrobot Peter and learn a lot more about his past as well as Andy's.
Sometimes I feel like your chapters are going nowhere - one of the things about these kinds of stories is that you have to add something for the reader to look forward to so they know where they're going. That's why I thought the trip to Mexico was a good idea plotwise. And finally I felt in this chapter we are actually getting somewhere, it's not just a lot of sexual frustration and cynicism. If there's any kind of criticism I have on this story, it's simply the overall negativity of everything - but I don't know, I suppose that adds to the charm...
This is the highlight of my weekend sadly. Can't wait for another update!
5/13/2006 c20 16Collar de Espinas
Hey there!
This chapter was really great; I love character histories and I've been wondering about Andy's for a while. We already know about Peter's but I think it really did him some good to say it all outloud to somebody.
Tony is an arsewipe.
I still love Andy. Really, you keep giving me more and more reasons *to* love Andy with all the little signs of affection he bestows upon Peter. Really, it's the little things like working on the car or hugging that are far more romantic than the usual song-and-dance of flowers and rings and all that sappy stuff. Love it.
Oh, and I'm SO glad that someone else is appalled by that story summary! I saw it yesterday and was beyond disgusted by it. It's not even that they *have* to include that as a warning 'cause let's face it, you don't... It's the fact that they *think* they need to! *is outraged*
Hey there!
This chapter was really great; I love character histories and I've been wondering about Andy's for a while. We already know about Peter's but I think it really did him some good to say it all outloud to somebody.
Tony is an arsewipe.
I still love Andy. Really, you keep giving me more and more reasons *to* love Andy with all the little signs of affection he bestows upon Peter. Really, it's the little things like working on the car or hugging that are far more romantic than the usual song-and-dance of flowers and rings and all that sappy stuff. Love it.
Oh, and I'm SO glad that someone else is appalled by that story summary! I saw it yesterday and was beyond disgusted by it. It's not even that they *have* to include that as a warning 'cause let's face it, you don't... It's the fact that they *think* they need to! *is outraged*
5/13/2006 c20 2Ubiquitous Muffin Smuggler
Pfft! Don't worry about the whole "interracial thing". It's fine if people have problems with it because the people who love this fic don't mind at all. Kudos! I love the way this fic is heading..something good I hope? Keep on writing please..I can't wait for another chapter to come out.
Pfft! Don't worry about the whole "interracial thing". It's fine if people have problems with it because the people who love this fic don't mind at all. Kudos! I love the way this fic is heading..something good I hope? Keep on writing please..I can't wait for another chapter to come out.
5/10/2006 c19 4wickedzl
Marvelous. Applauds. This chapter was great. "Sometimes I swear to God you're deprived." That phrase was lovely. =D Horny but lovely.
ZL
Marvelous. Applauds. This chapter was great. "Sometimes I swear to God you're deprived." That phrase was lovely. =D Horny but lovely.
ZL
5/9/2006 c19 1davidfnbowie
aww, this chapter was lovely.i liked the interaction between cassandra and peter.update soon, please.
aww, this chapter was lovely.i liked the interaction between cassandra and peter.update soon, please.