for Mascara10/21/2013 c20 muzzywozhere
Why do I get the feeling he tells everybody his story? (Andy) Well, I do know why but I don't want to believe it.
Why do I get the feeling he tells everybody his story? (Andy) Well, I do know why but I don't want to believe it.
10/21/2013 c16 muzzywozhere
Yes, I was listening to 45 by Shinedown whilst reading this book. Yes.
btw i love that band omg v.v i dont think y
Yes, I was listening to 45 by Shinedown whilst reading this book. Yes.
btw i love that band omg v.v i dont think y
9/12/2013 c23 Guest
That was amazing
That was amazing
6/26/2013 c23 Roasted
This was really good! I thought it was gonna be really angsty or something, but it was a really good balance between everything. Thankyou for making an awesome story!
This was really good! I thought it was gonna be really angsty or something, but it was a really good balance between everything. Thankyou for making an awesome story!
3/20/2013 c23 bbbee
I applaud you for creating these awful characters (in the sense that they are terrible people in a lot of ways) and still managing to make me enjoy their story and empathize for them, and root for their relationship. That is something really impressive.
hugs
I applaud you for creating these awful characters (in the sense that they are terrible people in a lot of ways) and still managing to make me enjoy their story and empathize for them, and root for their relationship. That is something really impressive.
hugs
3/19/2013 c18 AJmusic
Finally! I thought you were just gonna make us go crazy with curiousity but you actually told us what Mohawk was all about! Yay! Sorry I'm a little excited. *sheepish grin*
Finally! I thought you were just gonna make us go crazy with curiousity but you actually told us what Mohawk was all about! Yay! Sorry I'm a little excited. *sheepish grin*
3/4/2013 c23 
1BlaseBlanco
While I never understood where you were going with your chapter titles, it didn't stop me from loving this story. Your characters are absolutely AMAZING and they just kept me reading.
1BlaseBlancoWhile I never understood where you were going with your chapter titles, it didn't stop me from loving this story. Your characters are absolutely AMAZING and they just kept me reading.
3/1/2013 c23 yoojae
ohmygosh i loooove this story, especially peter, although sometimes he was such a pessimist. but i guess its not his fault. i love him more for it ;) i read this all in once sitting, and really enjoyed the author notes (which, ironically, are from over six years ago! Don't even know if you'll even read this review) and i'm glad that i was able to read this as a completed story because i sure as heck wouldn't have been able to wait for chapter updates. My bad capitalization or whatever is starting to get me now, ick. But anyways, I just can't tell you, really, how much I like this story. Going from Peter's (and Andy's) characterization to the background setting, the dialogue and plot, the way you write and the emotion put into it- I love everything about it! I'm so glad they have a happy ending, and thank god this isn't one of those angst stories that end up in heartbreak. I really can't take any more of those, I swear a small part of my heart dies each and every time that happens especially when I end up getting so emotionally involved. Anyways, I absolutely adore this story! Thanks for it :D
ohmygosh i loooove this story, especially peter, although sometimes he was such a pessimist. but i guess its not his fault. i love him more for it ;) i read this all in once sitting, and really enjoyed the author notes (which, ironically, are from over six years ago! Don't even know if you'll even read this review) and i'm glad that i was able to read this as a completed story because i sure as heck wouldn't have been able to wait for chapter updates. My bad capitalization or whatever is starting to get me now, ick. But anyways, I just can't tell you, really, how much I like this story. Going from Peter's (and Andy's) characterization to the background setting, the dialogue and plot, the way you write and the emotion put into it- I love everything about it! I'm so glad they have a happy ending, and thank god this isn't one of those angst stories that end up in heartbreak. I really can't take any more of those, I swear a small part of my heart dies each and every time that happens especially when I end up getting so emotionally involved. Anyways, I absolutely adore this story! Thanks for it :D
1/8/2013 c23 7opelleam
I really like your story and the relationship between those two. it was well written and i just couldn't stop reading it!
7opelleamI really like your story and the relationship between those two. it was well written and i just couldn't stop reading it!
12/25/2012 c23 allancaldera
I am going to be honest never in my life I feel that I would love this story as my taste is different, but when I start reading it I start loving it for the weird way it first I thought you would had not make them be they did :)(sorry for my review if its crappy or bad but its 5:38am in the country I am) I stay all morning/whatever you prefer reading the first and middle chapters this story was depressing me in a good way but later it start to make me fell happy that maybe they would be together thank God it happen in this chapter and that Peter finally told Andy he love him.I need to say that the character I love the most is Andy love how romantic he was and how good he was with Peter even when Peter make him suffer. hope you read my review if you are still in Fictionpress.
Ps this is the longest review I had ever make in here and probably anywhere else.
Allan Calderini
I am going to be honest never in my life I feel that I would love this story as my taste is different, but when I start reading it I start loving it for the weird way it first I thought you would had not make them be they did :)(sorry for my review if its crappy or bad but its 5:38am in the country I am) I stay all morning/whatever you prefer reading the first and middle chapters this story was depressing me in a good way but later it start to make me fell happy that maybe they would be together thank God it happen in this chapter and that Peter finally told Andy he love him.I need to say that the character I love the most is Andy love how romantic he was and how good he was with Peter even when Peter make him suffer. hope you read my review if you are still in Fictionpress.
Ps this is the longest review I had ever make in here and probably anywhere else.
Allan Calderini
10/26/2012 c13 paputsza
Coming from me, this is a compliment, but you must have been on crack to write that chapter. Or at the very least off of your schizo medication. I'm sure his prefrontal cortex will just bounce back.
Coming from me, this is a compliment, but you must have been on crack to write that chapter. Or at the very least off of your schizo medication. I'm sure his prefrontal cortex will just bounce back.
10/16/2012 c23 6MAH1
It's proven possible. A good story, memorable characters, drama without cheating or breaking up for ten years only to get married at the very last chapter ( I hate those stories). And this was funny and moving and did I mention no cheating (hate those stories as well)?
I'm not going to try to do an in-depth review since I'm no good at those but I just had to state that this is the best story on FP in my opinion and comes so close to being my favorite slash story.
The only question is, how come stuff like this doesn't get published. Looking at the latest book I bought this is so much better.
Loved it.
6MAH1It's proven possible. A good story, memorable characters, drama without cheating or breaking up for ten years only to get married at the very last chapter ( I hate those stories). And this was funny and moving and did I mention no cheating (hate those stories as well)?
I'm not going to try to do an in-depth review since I'm no good at those but I just had to state that this is the best story on FP in my opinion and comes so close to being my favorite slash story.
The only question is, how come stuff like this doesn't get published. Looking at the latest book I bought this is so much better.
Loved it.
9/24/2012 c8 6Seshi
Just a quick comment, (full reviews come at the end of the story) I have to say we used to own a little stuffed toy dog that was the taco bell dog (I think we got it there at one point with a meal or something, note this was probably about 10 years ago now) and whenever you squeezed him he would say that "Yo quiero Taco Bell" line so when that came up here i had a perfect recording of it playing in my head. I couldn't stop giggling!
6SeshiJust a quick comment, (full reviews come at the end of the story) I have to say we used to own a little stuffed toy dog that was the taco bell dog (I think we got it there at one point with a meal or something, note this was probably about 10 years ago now) and whenever you squeezed him he would say that "Yo quiero Taco Bell" line so when that came up here i had a perfect recording of it playing in my head. I couldn't stop giggling!