for Mascara1/22/2006 c4 Pivoine
you know...I'm addicted to your story...you...evil...evil author! and I want more! damn you! gr...thanks for updating fast...I'll worship forever if you continue like this!
you know...I'm addicted to your story...you...evil...evil author! and I want more! damn you! gr...thanks for updating fast...I'll worship forever if you continue like this!
1/21/2006 c4 
4wickedzl
Whoa! This is is hot, sexy and beautiful. Can't wait for the next chapter. Make sure you're going to write as smooth as this. I'll be waiting...See yaz!
ZL
4wickedzlWhoa! This is is hot, sexy and beautiful. Can't wait for the next chapter. Make sure you're going to write as smooth as this. I'll be waiting...See yaz!
ZL
1/20/2006 c4 1chibicherrychan
Hell yeah! This is so captivating! Love the characters! Love how rough and unperfect their lives and themselves are. Love everything here and I can't seem to find anything to complain about... It is wonderfully written, both grammatically and technically speaking. Feels somewhat like we're part of it. Well, this doesn't really qualify as constructive criticism, does it? I still say that this story is great! Keep it up!
1chibicherrychanHell yeah! This is so captivating! Love the characters! Love how rough and unperfect their lives and themselves are. Love everything here and I can't seem to find anything to complain about... It is wonderfully written, both grammatically and technically speaking. Feels somewhat like we're part of it. Well, this doesn't really qualify as constructive criticism, does it? I still say that this story is great! Keep it up!
1/20/2006 c4 4mandrake-o
I still love this story. It doesn't fail to amuse me. I wish I could keep reading it forever.
=) Mandraco.
4mandrake-oI still love this story. It doesn't fail to amuse me. I wish I could keep reading it forever.
=) Mandraco.
1/20/2006 c4 fei-yen
Update soon please? I'm tied up in knots, anxious what Andy would say.
Update soon please? I'm tied up in knots, anxious what Andy would say.
1/18/2006 c3 Pivoine
Wow I like this -I know it's not really a constructed review- I mean I really really like it -it's better- Ok I try again : I really really really really really really like it -sigh- I'm weird...-sigh- and I forget that same old refrain : please update! soon? really soon? really really really soon? I love you! Awesome story!
Wow I like this -I know it's not really a constructed review- I mean I really really like it -it's better- Ok I try again : I really really really really really really like it -sigh- I'm weird...-sigh- and I forget that same old refrain : please update! soon? really soon? really really really soon? I love you! Awesome story!
1/15/2006 c3 mandrake-o
I like this story. It's amusing.
Thing is, when Andy said his name was Andy to that girl, I automatically thought he was lying. He doesn't seem like an Andy.
Can't wait to find out what's up with Sam.
And with regard to the whole break; thing. I find that whole symbols not showing up thing frightfully annoying, too. I mean, what author doesn't use a few asterisks to indicate a time shift. Very few. And the fact that you used the word break; with the semi-colon just made my day because I hadn't made the connection.
=) Mandraco.
*goes back and reads story again*
I like this story. It's amusing.
Thing is, when Andy said his name was Andy to that girl, I automatically thought he was lying. He doesn't seem like an Andy.
Can't wait to find out what's up with Sam.
And with regard to the whole break; thing. I find that whole symbols not showing up thing frightfully annoying, too. I mean, what author doesn't use a few asterisks to indicate a time shift. Very few. And the fact that you used the word break; with the semi-colon just made my day because I hadn't made the connection.
=) Mandraco.
*goes back and reads story again*
1/13/2006 c3 1Serialcode A
I'm in love. Love I say. This story is spectacularly awesome. Love. Update soon. Make me happy. :D Damn Andy sounds hot... XD I'm seriously like, SO IN LOVE with this story. I want updates soon, bitch. XD But seriously, this is really well written. It's so... colloquial. Or however it's spelled. XD Whatever. Anyway. I really like the characters, and don't listen to doragon41, I think it's perfectly in character. Peter's a (previously) straight guy who just had gay sex. Of COURSE he's freaked out. But you know he'll do it again. And again. And a-okay, I'm done... XD
But yes. Update soon, dahling, because this story is too good to waste!
1Serialcode AI'm in love. Love I say. This story is spectacularly awesome. Love. Update soon. Make me happy. :D Damn Andy sounds hot... XD I'm seriously like, SO IN LOVE with this story. I want updates soon, bitch. XD But seriously, this is really well written. It's so... colloquial. Or however it's spelled. XD Whatever. Anyway. I really like the characters, and don't listen to doragon41, I think it's perfectly in character. Peter's a (previously) straight guy who just had gay sex. Of COURSE he's freaked out. But you know he'll do it again. And again. And a-okay, I'm done... XD
But yes. Update soon, dahling, because this story is too good to waste!
1/13/2006 c3 3doragon41
meh andy is ok...not as lame as peter though. and this chapter was pretty good but his freak out at the end seemed a little out of place. i could understand if he was drunk or high or something but he did all those actions willingly and to freak out suddenly when he wakes up seems...well just out of place. but the chapter as a whole was good and keep it up cuz youre pretty much a rock star.
3doragon41meh andy is ok...not as lame as peter though. and this chapter was pretty good but his freak out at the end seemed a little out of place. i could understand if he was drunk or high or something but he did all those actions willingly and to freak out suddenly when he wakes up seems...well just out of place. but the chapter as a whole was good and keep it up cuz youre pretty much a rock star.
1/7/2006 c2 19Jangalian
Hahmigawsh, I can't believe this story has so few reviews. It's totally cool! :DD Uber luff to Pete and Mr. Mystery Fucker! XD
Update soon!
Kudos!
19JangalianHahmigawsh, I can't believe this story has so few reviews. It's totally cool! :DD Uber luff to Pete and Mr. Mystery Fucker! XD
Update soon!
Kudos!
1/6/2006 c2 3doragon41
ooh i love it. ok so my only complaint; the names. you might be able to make peter owork but mr. stranger needs a hot name. like...aiden or something. but its ok because its just names and anyways uhh yup its good and definetly more.
3doragon41ooh i love it. ok so my only complaint; the names. you might be able to make peter owork but mr. stranger needs a hot name. like...aiden or something. but its ok because its just names and anyways uhh yup its good and definetly more.
1/6/2006 c2 Cherise
Wow. When do we get to learn the name of our "mystery fucker"? I really just cant get over the fact that he tracked dear Pete down just to fuck him again. And how...persuasive he was, hahaha. I never guessed that he would come looking for PETE I thought Pete would crumble and go looking for him! Hahaha, I don't know why, but at the end of this chapter, I couldn't help but laugh. Well, hopefully you'll update soon so I can hear of these two and their...adventures. Ciao, bella.
Wow. When do we get to learn the name of our "mystery fucker"? I really just cant get over the fact that he tracked dear Pete down just to fuck him again. And how...persuasive he was, hahaha. I never guessed that he would come looking for PETE I thought Pete would crumble and go looking for him! Hahaha, I don't know why, but at the end of this chapter, I couldn't help but laugh. Well, hopefully you'll update soon so I can hear of these two and their...adventures. Ciao, bella.
12/28/2005 c1 Cherise
Haha, loved, loved, loved, loved this! I especially liked when Petey told Cindy off! When she started squealing or whatever because he said he was on the verge of proposing, I couldn't help but laugh! And...the part about how he laughed because he was fucking a guy prettier than his girlfriend, yesh, pure gold. And...Pete was on bottom, right?
Haha, loved, loved, loved, loved this! I especially liked when Petey told Cindy off! When she started squealing or whatever because he said he was on the verge of proposing, I couldn't help but laugh! And...the part about how he laughed because he was fucking a guy prettier than his girlfriend, yesh, pure gold. And...Pete was on bottom, right?