for Mascara12/6/2009 c11 
5Nameless Shana
how does he keep a relatinoship for that long o.o? eight months then three years. Usually i seen only two month relationships in my school.
Poor Peter. losing his friend john
5Nameless Shanahow does he keep a relatinoship for that long o.o? eight months then three years. Usually i seen only two month relationships in my school.
Poor Peter. losing his friend john
12/3/2009 c5 Keela1221
wow, so far this is wat good! I can't wait to read the rest! Thanks for Posting
wow, so far this is wat good! I can't wait to read the rest! Thanks for Posting
11/11/2009 c23 wtfwaswrongwithteenme
I loved it. The story honestly depreesed me at first but oddly enough it ended up on a hopefull note. It was so realistic you thought out the characters history and its effects on their personality so well. Peter and andy both had ass holey tendencys but they redeming qualitys.
This is one of the most well writen storys I have read in a while. Im suprised you havent got more reviews for this.
Alecea_Sushine
I loved it. The story honestly depreesed me at first but oddly enough it ended up on a hopefull note. It was so realistic you thought out the characters history and its effects on their personality so well. Peter and andy both had ass holey tendencys but they redeming qualitys.
This is one of the most well writen storys I have read in a while. Im suprised you havent got more reviews for this.
Alecea_Sushine
10/27/2009 c23 Slash Rating
I LOVE THIS SO HARD. brb while I cry at the utter sappiness of that last part. D'AW.
I really like this, for a few reasons - the whole inferiority complex thing Pete's got going there? You pulled it off really well. And what can I say, I love the inferiority complex shit. Identification to some effect, or whatever.
Also, you really did the concept of the father's influence brilliantly. Seriously, it was amazing. Lots of times people think they're going against their parents, when it's actually their parents' influence that's making them go against their parents, and that whole cycle? I love that. And you portrayed it perfectly, too. Perfect scenarios and everything.
Another thing, but kind of linked to the last two, you had the most brilliant personalities ever. Very human, and very real. Complex and logical and true. You did the personalities superbly, right down to how the smallest things affect us, and how one thing manages to lead to another when they're not actually related. Your portrayal of the human psyche is goddamned amazing. I really love that.
Lastly, I have to say. I have so many quotes that I love from this I might have to compile a list and save them somewhere, because your characters' ideas on life and everything are just so, so real. Not necessarily true, like all human opinions are, but they're logical and feasible and it's what happens, isn't it? In real life. Those are actual opinions and ideas, and I really, really like that. Amazing job (this is the longest review I've given, EVER), this is definitely one of the top of my favourites.
I LOVE THIS SO HARD. brb while I cry at the utter sappiness of that last part. D'AW.
I really like this, for a few reasons - the whole inferiority complex thing Pete's got going there? You pulled it off really well. And what can I say, I love the inferiority complex shit. Identification to some effect, or whatever.
Also, you really did the concept of the father's influence brilliantly. Seriously, it was amazing. Lots of times people think they're going against their parents, when it's actually their parents' influence that's making them go against their parents, and that whole cycle? I love that. And you portrayed it perfectly, too. Perfect scenarios and everything.
Another thing, but kind of linked to the last two, you had the most brilliant personalities ever. Very human, and very real. Complex and logical and true. You did the personalities superbly, right down to how the smallest things affect us, and how one thing manages to lead to another when they're not actually related. Your portrayal of the human psyche is goddamned amazing. I really love that.
Lastly, I have to say. I have so many quotes that I love from this I might have to compile a list and save them somewhere, because your characters' ideas on life and everything are just so, so real. Not necessarily true, like all human opinions are, but they're logical and feasible and it's what happens, isn't it? In real life. Those are actual opinions and ideas, and I really, really like that. Amazing job (this is the longest review I've given, EVER), this is definitely one of the top of my favourites.
9/26/2009 c23 shhsilence
well done- i enjoyed it alot!
well done- i enjoyed it alot!
8/16/2009 c23 Danni-la
Wow this story is totally awesom :)
I really loved it,
It was a really nice ending
Wow this story is totally awesom :)
I really loved it,
It was a really nice ending
7/7/2009 c23 2Obsidian Lies
Wow, that was such a bitch to read,
it's 12:30 in the morning, my light is
flickering, i havent slept in a while,
and im strangely hungery,
but i read it, and depressingly we must be people
who write similar. I mean, i write depressing macabre,
but in a really similar style to your writing,
anyway my light went out,
and i cant see, blindness is non-apealing,
great job on the story,
i wish i could be stuffed writing something...
xObsidian
2Obsidian LiesWow, that was such a bitch to read,
it's 12:30 in the morning, my light is
flickering, i havent slept in a while,
and im strangely hungery,
but i read it, and depressingly we must be people
who write similar. I mean, i write depressing macabre,
but in a really similar style to your writing,
anyway my light went out,
and i cant see, blindness is non-apealing,
great job on the story,
i wish i could be stuffed writing something...
xObsidian
6/26/2009 c12 chippysocks
I've never heard of the term spranging, but then again I'm from the North East. But I guessed as much that he was just trying to bum some money.
I've never heard of the term spranging, but then again I'm from the North East. But I guessed as much that he was just trying to bum some money.
6/23/2009 c7 1honey splattered brains
gahahahahaha. its so true. only assholes fall for assholes. and since peter loves andy and vice versa, its all good _ GAH. the part where peter was all pathetic-y and clinged to andy and andy was all like BAD DOG! made me feel sad ): THE ARGUMENT AND HENRY GETTING BEAT UP BY ANDY (CAUSE HE WAS JEALOUS AND PETER WANTED HIM TO GET JEALOUS) WAS LIKE KDJFLKSDFJLKDFJKJF -CRY- but the kiss at the end was random and made me feel really happy
1honey splattered brainsgahahahahaha. its so true. only assholes fall for assholes. and since peter loves andy and vice versa, its all good _ GAH. the part where peter was all pathetic-y and clinged to andy and andy was all like BAD DOG! made me feel sad ): THE ARGUMENT AND HENRY GETTING BEAT UP BY ANDY (CAUSE HE WAS JEALOUS AND PETER WANTED HIM TO GET JEALOUS) WAS LIKE KDJFLKSDFJLKDFJKJF -CRY- but the kiss at the end was random and made me feel really happy
6/21/2009 c23 Lisa
Really nice story. And Peter's reaction to rug girl and Harry? Um.. he feels that they're both young and naive and innocent and grows a conscience?
Really nice story. And Peter's reaction to rug girl and Harry? Um.. he feels that they're both young and naive and innocent and grows a conscience?
6/14/2009 c9 wonderland212
Peter is kind of an ass in this chapter :( What he did to Henry was awful...it wasnt even funny...oh and i love that andy speaks spanish, its sexy
Peter is kind of an ass in this chapter :( What he did to Henry was awful...it wasnt even funny...oh and i love that andy speaks spanish, its sexy
6/13/2009 c5 Rue Street
Peter is kind of a bastard isnt he? I still like him though, oddly enough. Dont know how I feel about Andy, Tom sorta saddens me and Sam gets on my nerves. :D I like the story so far! -RS
Peter is kind of a bastard isnt he? I still like him though, oddly enough. Dont know how I feel about Andy, Tom sorta saddens me and Sam gets on my nerves. :D I like the story so far! -RS
6/8/2009 c23 Shinrei04
This was a really good story. Part of that last chapter had me crying like a baby.
This was a really good story. Part of that last chapter had me crying like a baby.