for Drug Addiction Fairytale3/24/2006 c15 Kris Staples
I started reading this story Thursday morning... and frankly, I couldn't stop! I was thinking about it all at school and everything, and I'm sorry that now, like everybody who read the first chapter and are now waiting for the last, I can't just go to the next chapter - the suspense is killing me! Thanks for the good read... I can't wait until the next chapter! There were only a few minor things I noticed throughout the story that I would have changed, but overall, I award it 5/5 stars!
I started reading this story Thursday morning... and frankly, I couldn't stop! I was thinking about it all at school and everything, and I'm sorry that now, like everybody who read the first chapter and are now waiting for the last, I can't just go to the next chapter - the suspense is killing me! Thanks for the good read... I can't wait until the next chapter! There were only a few minor things I noticed throughout the story that I would have changed, but overall, I award it 5/5 stars!
3/24/2006 c15 
9InspiredSpider
very good i think you portrayed the seriousness of drugs really well and zach is okay he hasn't blown me away yet but i'm open lol okay bye update ~spider~
9InspiredSpidervery good i think you portrayed the seriousness of drugs really well and zach is okay he hasn't blown me away yet but i'm open lol okay bye update ~spider~
3/24/2006 c15 8Out-Spoken-Runaway
O_O
Wow. A whole lot of drama. And not to mention I just had to watch and Ecstacy video in health xD...Hope he doesn't overdose, then he's dead. Anyways...I hope Jude doesn't die yet.
And Zach? He seems pretty nice. I can see how Jude would get angry if Zach called O_O. Would be crazy...More drama!
Anyways, great chapter. Keep writing!
XxFallingxX
8Out-Spoken-RunawayO_O
Wow. A whole lot of drama. And not to mention I just had to watch and Ecstacy video in health xD...Hope he doesn't overdose, then he's dead. Anyways...I hope Jude doesn't die yet.
And Zach? He seems pretty nice. I can see how Jude would get angry if Zach called O_O. Would be crazy...More drama!
Anyways, great chapter. Keep writing!
XxFallingxX
3/24/2006 c15 Sam
Sorry, my bad about Joseph Radler. I'm indifferent to Zach's character because he is new but he seems to know what he wants. I think Katelyn gave him the wrong impression that she is single and Jude is quite jealous so I see trouble. As for Jude he needs help and if he doesn't fall into a coma he should consider himself lucky. Maybe sometimes a person has to fall before they see the light. Good chapter and thanks for updating.
Sorry, my bad about Joseph Radler. I'm indifferent to Zach's character because he is new but he seems to know what he wants. I think Katelyn gave him the wrong impression that she is single and Jude is quite jealous so I see trouble. As for Jude he needs help and if he doesn't fall into a coma he should consider himself lucky. Maybe sometimes a person has to fall before they see the light. Good chapter and thanks for updating.
3/23/2006 c15 15alter-ego52
Another great chapter... I don't know if it's just me, but I don't really like Zach... maybe because I have the feeling that he's just gonna cause trouble between Jude and Katelyn, but oh well lol. Update soon!
15alter-ego52Another great chapter... I don't know if it's just me, but I don't really like Zach... maybe because I have the feeling that he's just gonna cause trouble between Jude and Katelyn, but oh well lol. Update soon!
3/23/2006 c15 2Lightning Storm
Jude what are you doing. You're going to lose Katelyn. You never ever take pills that someone gives you when you're already stoned/drunk outta your mind. He's so stupid, but I sypathize with him. Unfortunetly, I can relate to why Jude is doing this, I had a slight problem not to long ago. I think that's a reason I like this story so much, I wanna see how Jude gets past all of this, or if he will, granted he survives this trip.
I like Zach, he seems really cool, and hes sure to add to the drama.
Update real soon
2Lightning StormJude what are you doing. You're going to lose Katelyn. You never ever take pills that someone gives you when you're already stoned/drunk outta your mind. He's so stupid, but I sypathize with him. Unfortunetly, I can relate to why Jude is doing this, I had a slight problem not to long ago. I think that's a reason I like this story so much, I wanna see how Jude gets past all of this, or if he will, granted he survives this trip.
I like Zach, he seems really cool, and hes sure to add to the drama.
Update real soon
3/23/2006 c15 amelia
wow...its like everything is spining out of control here. zach...wonder what jude will say. but esp. what will Katelyn say when jude comes back like this...i'd slap him, then take him to a hospital.yea...i've seen frequency, it was good.
wow...its like everything is spining out of control here. zach...wonder what jude will say. but esp. what will Katelyn say when jude comes back like this...i'd slap him, then take him to a hospital.yea...i've seen frequency, it was good.
3/23/2006 c15 torr
hey! i really like your story! but eck, zach seems nasty.
hey! i really like your story! but eck, zach seems nasty.
3/22/2006 c14 15alter-ego52
Amazing chapter, as usual! Update soon plz! I especially loved the part when Jude's dad asked if he was picturing her naked... haha great work on this, keep it up.
15alter-ego52Amazing chapter, as usual! Update soon plz! I especially loved the part when Jude's dad asked if he was picturing her naked... haha great work on this, keep it up.
3/22/2006 c14 2Lightning Storm
A few spelling mistakes are aloud in a story this good. I'm in love with it already.
Update soon, I can't wait to read more
2Lightning StormA few spelling mistakes are aloud in a story this good. I'm in love with it already.
Update soon, I can't wait to read more
3/22/2006 c14 9InspiredSpider
whoa ineed to catch up huh? i keep coming a chapter late... but college has been a little hectic so oh by the way I hope your Aunty and her twins are okay...yes Jude and Katelyn love yay i thought that scene with her father was sweet and evan reminds me of the incredible hulk haha. you know, i never realised andy's hair was blonde i thought of him as having dark brown hair and i'm glad him and laurie are kicking off aswell alright byebye update soon ~spider~
9InspiredSpiderwhoa ineed to catch up huh? i keep coming a chapter late... but college has been a little hectic so oh by the way I hope your Aunty and her twins are okay...yes Jude and Katelyn love yay i thought that scene with her father was sweet and evan reminds me of the incredible hulk haha. you know, i never realised andy's hair was blonde i thought of him as having dark brown hair and i'm glad him and laurie are kicking off aswell alright byebye update soon ~spider~
3/22/2006 c14 Sam
Okay after that kiss that Jude and Katelyn shared there has to be questions from both sides concerning feelings and what was that about. I think she kissed Jude more than her ex, hehe. I really like the flow and tempo of each chapter. Okay in future chapters I think Joseph Radler (you even highlighted his name) and Evan will be the debacle that messes up the prefect lives of our future couples. A good chapter, keep up the good work and I'm glad your aunt is fine. Thanks for updating.
Okay after that kiss that Jude and Katelyn shared there has to be questions from both sides concerning feelings and what was that about. I think she kissed Jude more than her ex, hehe. I really like the flow and tempo of each chapter. Okay in future chapters I think Joseph Radler (you even highlighted his name) and Evan will be the debacle that messes up the prefect lives of our future couples. A good chapter, keep up the good work and I'm glad your aunt is fine. Thanks for updating.
3/22/2006 c14 KitBunny
deciding to review finally ^_^ i believe this is one of your best, and yes :F you have your typical errors which word doesn't catch cause it's dumb like that but i really like where this is going chey. keep it up
deciding to review finally ^_^ i believe this is one of your best, and yes :F you have your typical errors which word doesn't catch cause it's dumb like that but i really like where this is going chey. keep it up
3/22/2006 c14 whacked
ahh..i hope you didn't mean love triangles between jude katlyen and the joseph radler son. i hate and totally abhor love triangles! please please don't let this great story become another soap opra on fictionpress...hehehe other than that..i look forward to it!..really good chapter! till the next one...
ahh..i hope you didn't mean love triangles between jude katlyen and the joseph radler son. i hate and totally abhor love triangles! please please don't let this great story become another soap opra on fictionpress...hehehe other than that..i look forward to it!..really good chapter! till the next one...
3/21/2006 c14 random reader
hey! i love your story! and i love the fact that you update really quick. its amazing. you are a fantastic writter and you seriously have me hooked. what can i say. so continue on doing what you do best :) thank you
hey! i love your story! and i love the fact that you update really quick. its amazing. you are a fantastic writter and you seriously have me hooked. what can i say. so continue on doing what you do best :) thank you