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2/28/2006 c7 9InspiredSpider
you know i was so happy to see you updated so SOON i was like YEAH (and then I started singing Usher and i forgot about the story for a little bit until my mum told me to shut up)ah bless Matthew blushing (he so digs Katelyn) is Kevin really completely unaware about his drunken attacks? Is he normally nice when he's sober? Like... split personalities... Jude made me laugh "what good are you to a husband" haha Katelyn is like me i can cook but i won't and I DON'T clean OMG are you NUTZ? I do like Andy... but I want to know more about him I mean he could be a werewolf or a secret drag queen- OMG IS HE? THAT WOULD BE SO COOL. LOL I'm being an idiot but seriously you know i know i'm this loony reviewer but this is probably my fave story on fictionpress at the mo so WOW you should feel HONOURED and i like laurie but oh isn't she shifty... well not really but OMG I've had an idea lets push KENDALL of a CLIFF! Oh that's too evil maybe... hmm... i'll think about it... let's just get SEXY JUDE to beat him up or something whatever I don't know use a rubber chicken WHY do I always review your story when i'm in crazy mode? sometimes I'm NORMAL I swear. Well the point of this is to update soon. Until then... ~spider~ (OMG a FISH just flew past my window. I'm joking of course I just always wanted to say that. Come on I'm not REALLY insane hahaha)
2/28/2006 c7 whacked
when you said in your summary that you won't regret reading this...i was kind of weary..a lot of the times when people say that in their summary i do end up regreting it...but this...this is nothing short of amazing. i love your writing. seriously its so good, you have a way of making your characters seem real (except maybe how naive katlyn is..it just seems like...umm can anyone be like that? but i guess there must be people like her) you also make their emotions very real so its easy to connect with them. i really really really want to know why jude is doing drugs..so far i havn't been able to figure it out and put it down to peer pressure..anyways..wow..i love your writing and like how this story is going...i really really can't wait for the next update!p.s you really need to break kendall and katlyn up! (i hate him!)
2/28/2006 c7 1greythoughts
Cool story! Can't wait for Katelyn to find out bout Kendall! Ha! But Jude had better be there for her! If not, poor Katelyn.
2/27/2006 c7 6Polished Gem
Excellent. Excellent. And even more excellent. I can't wait to find out what happens next. And I hope that Laurie doesn't end up too hurt.
2/27/2006 c7 vintagelove
omg! Yes, at least they are progressing...kinda. lol

No, i don't want Laurie to be with Jude. To me, she seemed almost evil in this chapter, haha lol.

But anyways, can't wait until you update!
2/27/2006 c7 Cherise
Katelyn's almost to naive to bear...
2/27/2006 c7 8voice.writer
WOW! That's really all I can say...WOW! Well, actually, I can say more than that. I'm serious, this is INCREDIBLE...the dialogue in this one stood out to me even more than others. It's so real!

Man, if only I could write like you...I've got major writer's block right now but obviously you don't! KEEP IT COMING!
2/26/2006 c6 15alter-ego52
Great chapter... and I can't wait to see what happens after reading the preview! Looks like things are getting going...
2/26/2006 c6 9InspiredSpider
this sucks you know. I bet you think i'm flaming you but i'm not it sucks because it's so good and you gave that preview and now i'm breaking out in hives and having anxiety attacks (omg omfg i need an update) Jude is like buffness even his name is sexy i love that name it's so cute that he has this mild obsession with Katelyn and she's oblivious and i'll feel so sorry for her domestic situation i just want to give her a big hug and say "it's okay" GOSH i'm so pathetic (come on spider this isn't REAL) excuse me while i add another entry to my list of Things NOT to Do When You Are On Your Own: No 242: Don't start screaming out loud because you desperately want an upload. Crazy siblings are apt to come and throw mushrooms at you. No I'm serious. My brothers do that. Oh WTF am I going on about? I'm just writing crap now (even though that mushroom thing is true) alright ALRIGHT I'm going seriously please update soon maybe you think i'm this crazy girl calling herself Spider so if you wish me not to submit crazy replies anymore at the end of your next chappie just put InspiredSpider: X. I won't be offended. X is for No. Well actually N is. Oh gosh I'm sorry for being insane it's late and I'm tired. I LIKE this. Update ~spider}~
2/26/2006 c6 BlooCheese
I love the different POVs. Really great story. Please update.
2/26/2006 c1 3vintagelove
i love it! This story rocks and i've been reading since the beginning i just haven't had time to review. Sorry about that...

I can't wait till next chapter, Jude seems so hot, my God!

Update soon!

2/25/2006 c5 7Calliope Veronica
Can't wait to read about Katelyn and Jude's detention...
2/24/2006 c3 Calliope Veronica
It was hard to read about Katelyn and Mary's dad abusing them, but of course that is only part of the story.

I really like what you've done with this; sorry I never seem to have time to read it... :(
2/24/2006 c2 Calliope Veronica
' "Hey hat's my action figure!"

"So? You broke my barbie! I found her head in the cat litter!"

And then it was gone, flushed down the toilet.'

I used to be like that when I was little! ^_^ I was so mean to the boys...
2/20/2006 c5 15alter-ego52
Great chapter, I love how this story is going. Can't wait to read more!
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