
9/29/2008 c21 Lady R
I like how you re-wrote these chapters. It was much better, and the emotions were still there like in the original. Glad to see you still haven't given up on this re-write.
I like how you re-wrote these chapters. It was much better, and the emotions were still there like in the original. Glad to see you still haven't given up on this re-write.
9/27/2008 c21
2elle.bw
You are fabulous! I adore this story with a fiery passion. (:
I'm anxious to see if Jude says 'I love you' back and when she finds out and how he'll make it up to her...
Anyways can you please, please, please e-mail or PM or respond back to this message so I know when you plan on updating again? How about now? Hehe.
Amazing as always,
elle.bw

You are fabulous! I adore this story with a fiery passion. (:
I'm anxious to see if Jude says 'I love you' back and when she finds out and how he'll make it up to her...
Anyways can you please, please, please e-mail or PM or respond back to this message so I know when you plan on updating again? How about now? Hehe.
Amazing as always,
elle.bw
9/26/2008 c21 xoxo1
omg, no! i cant believe he slept with two other girls and then LIED to her about it.
he was drunk and the girl drugged him, right?
ugh, he is soo stupid
omg, no! i cant believe he slept with two other girls and then LIED to her about it.
he was drunk and the girl drugged him, right?
ugh, he is soo stupid
8/24/2008 c18
9TheFallenHeroine
Wo, quick update :)
Great chapter, like always :)
Update soon, I'm dying to know what happens! :)
x

Wo, quick update :)
Great chapter, like always :)
Update soon, I'm dying to know what happens! :)
x
8/24/2008 c17 TheFallenHeroine
Yay, you finally updated :)
Nice chapters, keep up the good work and update soon :)
x
Yay, you finally updated :)
Nice chapters, keep up the good work and update soon :)
x
8/12/2008 c15
2akaCHEEKS
bo. how come claudia and kendall don't get their own little part in the chapters? are you going to add in the part where laurie and andy sleeps together? that was a really good chapter by the way, shows how intimate they get with each other. and by the way, laurie's mom looks better with blonde hair cause it contradicts with laurie herself. and didn't katelyn have gray eyes to begin with? sucks that you changed those details.. =( you should put them back..

bo. how come claudia and kendall don't get their own little part in the chapters? are you going to add in the part where laurie and andy sleeps together? that was a really good chapter by the way, shows how intimate they get with each other. and by the way, laurie's mom looks better with blonde hair cause it contradicts with laurie herself. and didn't katelyn have gray eyes to begin with? sucks that you changed those details.. =( you should put them back..
8/12/2008 c7 akaCHEEKS
aaw dude why did you change some parts? now it seems all cliche'd and stuff. you should have kept the part where laurie had a little crush with jude. that way it was more realistic, cause you know, if i was in her position and just made friends with katelyn who has this really hot guy always bugging her, i would be curious about him too and a little fascinated. even develop a small liking to him. right? are you going to finish editing this story by any chance? it was really good and i hope you continue!
aaw dude why did you change some parts? now it seems all cliche'd and stuff. you should have kept the part where laurie had a little crush with jude. that way it was more realistic, cause you know, if i was in her position and just made friends with katelyn who has this really hot guy always bugging her, i would be curious about him too and a little fascinated. even develop a small liking to him. right? are you going to finish editing this story by any chance? it was really good and i hope you continue!
4/14/2008 c1
1Angel-Leigh Jones
hiya
i really love this story. Is there only 15 chapters? i am not sure if you are still reviewing it and changing. :)
thanks for writing it. its great
angel

hiya
i really love this story. Is there only 15 chapters? i am not sure if you are still reviewing it and changing. :)
thanks for writing it. its great
angel
1/31/2008 c15 Mizuki
Absolutly love your story!
Your a very good writer I mean a few mistakes here and there but nothing a little editing can fix.
I'm really anxious to read more I really wanna see what happens with Jude and Katelyn and I want to find out more about his drug problem. I hope he comes clean with Katie otherwise he's gonna really hurt her. XD
I can't wait to read more so please continue with this story ^-^
~Mizuki
Absolutly love your story!
Your a very good writer I mean a few mistakes here and there but nothing a little editing can fix.
I'm really anxious to read more I really wanna see what happens with Jude and Katelyn and I want to find out more about his drug problem. I hope he comes clean with Katie otherwise he's gonna really hurt her. XD
I can't wait to read more so please continue with this story ^-^
~Mizuki
1/30/2008 c15
2simplicity is complex
its fantastic. i forgot about doing my homework because of this -.- roar. update soon!

its fantastic. i forgot about doing my homework because of this -.- roar. update soon!