for Drug Addiction Fairytale12/30/2005 c2 Jmarit17
Great Chapter!:) He's so mean, lol, but its funny. Like the peeks into tehir lives.
Write more soon please
Kellie
Great Chapter!:) He's so mean, lol, but its funny. Like the peeks into tehir lives.
Write more soon please
Kellie
12/30/2005 c2 
2BlackFireyPhoenix86
Really good second chapter.. Her father is a Jerk, and some other words I don't think I should say...
But anyways, just wanted to say great story... And I so can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...
Keep up the good work... ^_^
2BlackFireyPhoenix86Really good second chapter.. Her father is a Jerk, and some other words I don't think I should say...
But anyways, just wanted to say great story... And I so can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...
Keep up the good work... ^_^
12/30/2005 c1 BlackFireyPhoenix86
Really good chapter so far... I think I'm going to like this story... So far its a really good story...
I so can't wait to see what happen's in the next chapters to come...
Keep up the good work... ^_^
Really good chapter so far... I think I'm going to like this story... So far its a really good story...
I so can't wait to see what happen's in the next chapters to come...
Keep up the good work... ^_^
12/30/2005 c2 8voice.writer
Hahahahahaha I LOVE this! I like the humor and the reality of the characters...it's really great. Keep on truckin'!
8voice.writerHahahahahaha I LOVE this! I like the humor and the reality of the characters...it's really great. Keep on truckin'!
12/29/2005 c1 7Calliope Veronica
I like it; especially Katelyn's flashback when Jude broke her crayon... ^_^ keep writing!
.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.
7Calliope VeronicaI like it; especially Katelyn's flashback when Jude broke her crayon... ^_^ keep writing!
.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.
12/29/2005 c1 ladededa
i loved it! its a great start and i cant wait for another update
i loved it! its a great start and i cant wait for another update
12/29/2005 c1 2Kohnitz
wow. I loved it. Really, really great! Are the characters based on anyone? Good use of dialouge and switching from 1st person to third. I love the way it's worded!
xoxSomehow.girl
2Kohnitzwow. I loved it. Really, really great! Are the characters based on anyone? Good use of dialouge and switching from 1st person to third. I love the way it's worded!
xoxSomehow.girl
12/29/2005 c1 Prettiest Wreck
Great first chapter! It flowed very well, even with the POV changes. I'm very interested to see where this is going, so update soon :)
~ PrettiestWreck
Great first chapter! It flowed very well, even with the POV changes. I'm very interested to see where this is going, so update soon :)
~ PrettiestWreck
12/29/2005 c1 8voice.writer
Whoa...you're really good! I love how the POVs change and how you really use voice to distinguish who's talking.
By the way, I love how you actually don't write "Jude's POV" and "Katelyn's POV" when they switch. I always found that it interrupted the flow.
I'm adding you to my author alert list and adding this to my favorite stories list. Can't wait for more!
8voice.writerWhoa...you're really good! I love how the POVs change and how you really use voice to distinguish who's talking.
By the way, I love how you actually don't write "Jude's POV" and "Katelyn's POV" when they switch. I always found that it interrupted the flow.
I'm adding you to my author alert list and adding this to my favorite stories list. Can't wait for more!