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12/30/2005 c2 15alter-ego52
lol I like it. This story is addicting! Keep writing!
12/30/2005 c2 Jmarit17
Great Chapter!:) He's so mean, lol, but its funny. Like the peeks into tehir lives.

Write more soon please

12/30/2005 c2 2BlackFireyPhoenix86
Really good second chapter.. Her father is a Jerk, and some other words I don't think I should say...

But anyways, just wanted to say great story... And I so can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...

Keep up the good work... ^_^
12/30/2005 c1 BlackFireyPhoenix86
Really good chapter so far... I think I'm going to like this story... So far its a really good story...

I so can't wait to see what happen's in the next chapters to come...

Keep up the good work... ^_^
12/30/2005 c2 8voice.writer
Hahahahahaha I LOVE this! I like the humor and the reality of the characters...it's really great. Keep on truckin'!
12/29/2005 c1 3J. Marit
hey, i love it...and already love jude;)

write more soon please

12/29/2005 c1 4bex17
This was great! Update soon please!
12/29/2005 c1 7Calliope Veronica
I like it; especially Katelyn's flashback when Jude broke her crayon... ^_^ keep writing!

.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.
12/29/2005 c1 ladededa
i loved it! its a great start and i cant wait for another update
12/29/2005 c1 2Kohnitz
wow. I loved it. Really, really great! Are the characters based on anyone? Good use of dialouge and switching from 1st person to third. I love the way it's worded!

12/29/2005 c1 Prettiest Wreck
Great first chapter! It flowed very well, even with the POV changes. I'm very interested to see where this is going, so update soon :)

~ PrettiestWreck
12/29/2005 c1 8voice.writer
Whoa...you're really good! I love how the POVs change and how you really use voice to distinguish who's talking.

By the way, I love how you actually don't write "Jude's POV" and "Katelyn's POV" when they switch. I always found that it interrupted the flow.

I'm adding you to my author alert list and adding this to my favorite stories list. Can't wait for more!
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