
10/16/2007 c5 FPBob
Ha! I was excited to find this story again, completed and then was shcoked when it wasn't all here! Oh weel, probably for the best as I should be in bed and I knew this story would've kept me up all night. Looking forward to seeing the finshed re-edited version! Thanks for posting and caring enough to re-post!
Ha! I was excited to find this story again, completed and then was shcoked when it wasn't all here! Oh weel, probably for the best as I should be in bed and I knew this story would've kept me up all night. Looking forward to seeing the finshed re-edited version! Thanks for posting and caring enough to re-post!
10/14/2007 c5
16Hellcat81
hm, i wonder what's gonna happen next. the plot needs to thicken. hope andy reappears, i like his character.

hm, i wonder what's gonna happen next. the plot needs to thicken. hope andy reappears, i like his character.
10/11/2007 c3 Hellcat81
hey...nice fic. i'm a bit confused though. the fic is marked as completed so where is the rest of it?
hey...nice fic. i'm a bit confused though. the fic is marked as completed so where is the rest of it?
10/10/2007 c1 Lady R
This is one of my favorites, I can't imagine how it could get any better. However, I'm looking forward to reading this edited version. Will you be editing Getting a Fairytale, too?
This is one of my favorites, I can't imagine how it could get any better. However, I'm looking forward to reading this edited version. Will you be editing Getting a Fairytale, too?
10/8/2007 c1 antimisanthrope
Fantastic story.
Can't wait to read more of your work!
BTW, love the names you've chosen for the main characters. ;]
Fantastic story.
Can't wait to read more of your work!
BTW, love the names you've chosen for the main characters. ;]
6/22/2007 c32
1clear vision
good story but i got really annoyed with the grammer and punctuation mistakes. also, it seems like the characters don't have their own personalities. the way they thing are all alike, the way you wrote it. but i still like the story. i think the title may be a bit corny but that's okay. haha. good job.

good story but i got really annoyed with the grammer and punctuation mistakes. also, it seems like the characters don't have their own personalities. the way they thing are all alike, the way you wrote it. but i still like the story. i think the title may be a bit corny but that's okay. haha. good job.
6/21/2007 c8 clear vision
"o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o
12:30 a.m."
i think you mean P.M. because 12am is alright midnight. unless someone already pointed that out and you just left like that. haha
"o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o
12:30 a.m."
i think you mean P.M. because 12am is alright midnight. unless someone already pointed that out and you just left like that. haha
6/13/2007 c32 hannah
oh, that was just awesome, i loved every part of it, altough the ending was really sad. i'm going to read the sequel tomorrow as it's already late here (11pm) and i've college tomorrow. nd if i'm not mistaken i'm your 500th review
oh, that was just awesome, i loved every part of it, altough the ending was really sad. i'm going to read the sequel tomorrow as it's already late here (11pm) and i've college tomorrow. nd if i'm not mistaken i'm your 500th review
5/19/2007 c12
18Layla the fiend
AAW! I freaking LOVE this chapter! It's so sweet! Gahh!
Hearts for you

AAW! I freaking LOVE this chapter! It's so sweet! Gahh!
Hearts for you
4/30/2007 c32 Chamella
Love love love your story! So romantic, decent happy ending, and a tiny bit of warning about the drug abuse. But i think that reasons for experimenting or even addiction to drugs are usually much more deep and complex, and with the combination of these reasons and the "positive" effects the drugs have on our minds makes drug addiction not so easy to get rid of. My friends could tell you stories...;]
Love love love your story! So romantic, decent happy ending, and a tiny bit of warning about the drug abuse. But i think that reasons for experimenting or even addiction to drugs are usually much more deep and complex, and with the combination of these reasons and the "positive" effects the drugs have on our minds makes drug addiction not so easy to get rid of. My friends could tell you stories...;]
4/14/2007 c32
1honey splattered brains
OH MY GOSH! I CRIED TROUGH THIS WHOLE STORY! IT'S SO SAD!
But I did want you to make the ending where Katelyn really did go but he didn't see her. WAH

OH MY GOSH! I CRIED TROUGH THIS WHOLE STORY! IT'S SO SAD!
But I did want you to make the ending where Katelyn really did go but he didn't see her. WAH
3/23/2007 c32
7Queen of Autumn
So sad it has to end like this... Good story though... I'm sure I'm going to read the sequel... They get back together right? They're ment for eachother.
-x- Feronia

So sad it has to end like this... Good story though... I'm sure I'm going to read the sequel... They get back together right? They're ment for eachother.
-x- Feronia
3/11/2007 c32 Maria
aw. hey at least it just goes and shows you that life isn't all that perfect and you have to go through shit first before you get what you want. i'm just really happy that there's a sequel and i can read it right about now. i really love this story! the best so far!
aw. hey at least it just goes and shows you that life isn't all that perfect and you have to go through shit first before you get what you want. i'm just really happy that there's a sequel and i can read it right about now. i really love this story! the best so far!
3/11/2007 c16 Lisa
wow. this whole thing is really good so far. i really love how you detailed what it feels like to be high. but thankfully it's not your own experiences. i was getting worried for a second.
wow. this whole thing is really good so far. i really love how you detailed what it feels like to be high. but thankfully it's not your own experiences. i was getting worried for a second.